https://soundcloud.com/rimraz/wasted-on ... re/s-RdNbK
What do you think? What genre would you classify this as? My best guess is electronic gloom indie pop. I'm mainly looking for honest feedback on mixing, mastering, composition, etc. I'll return it when I get the chance.
Gloomy indie song that's too long for contest
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 41 posts since 14 Jun, 2016
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- KVRAF
- 1988 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
Change a few appropriate sounds here and there and it could be a good Retro piece.
I feel the vocals are too busy - there needs to be more rest between lines to give the listener a rest to take the lyrics in imho. e.g. from 0:47 to 1:21, the vocals are constant.
Otherwise, good, I like it.
I feel the vocals are too busy - there needs to be more rest between lines to give the listener a rest to take the lyrics in imho. e.g. from 0:47 to 1:21, the vocals are constant.
Otherwise, good, I like it.
