KVR Audio

Soimmo · Post by **Soimmo** » Mon Mar 18, 2019 11:57 am

Some super simple elevatror music to chiil-out:

https://soundcloud.com/geomystery/geomystery-p-ark

Any comments are welcome.

Wopelka · Post by **Wopelka** » Mon Mar 18, 2019 2:27 pm

I like the overall feel, dreamy and laid-back. Sound wise, I like the bass, the guitar and the e-piano. I'm less impressed by the drums and the synthy lead. Overall, even though there are a lot of different episodes, the music lacks of variety. It is as if we were always hearing the same loop over and over again. A pity, because there are a lot of good ideas all along this pseudo-loop. I am also not convinced by the harsh beginning and the brutal ending of the track. I am of the opinion that the intro and the outro are among the most important parts of a track, and they are missing here.

Soimmo · Post by **Soimmo** » Mon Mar 18, 2019 5:36 pm

Hi, Wopelka

Thank you for your valuable insight. Iam taking it on board.

Iam too lazy to make some intro and outro, but maybe simple fade-in and fade-out would be better than sharp attack.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Tue Mar 19, 2019 12:43 am

yeah, the stick starts to get annoying. i dont mind the lead
theres people that love/hate resonant meow synths... i like em.
it is a fairly repeating , safe, vanilla ditty that should have been over about the 3min mark.

Soimmo · Post by **Soimmo** » Tue Mar 19, 2019 7:28 am

Layzer: Did you actually listened to whole track?

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Wed Mar 20, 2019 1:24 am

Soimmo wrote: ↑Tue Mar 19, 2019 7:28 am Layzer: Did you actually listened to whole track?

all the way to the last meows @6:27

Soimmo · Post by **Soimmo** » Wed Mar 20, 2019 7:40 am

Ok, thank you.

Geomystery - P. Ark (chiilout, lounge)