Comments/questions welcome. Thx.
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[Electronic] tm-Away
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 388 posts since 20 Mar, 2019
Last edited by mindstuff on Mon Apr 15, 2019 6:36 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
My Feedback
Music - 4
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Performance - 7
Mix - 6
Overall - 6
Comments: Too much low mid. EQ is your friend. From 1:30 on a little better. Musically, not much to this. It's just a chord progression over and over with an ARP coming in a little later. Not enough variety to sustain a 5 minute track even with the occasional arrangement changes, dropping of drums, etc. It's just monotonous. A melody would really be nice. Klangy bell stuff towards the end could probably use some LPF. Way too loud.
Music - 4
Instruments - 7
Performance - 7
Mix - 6
Overall - 6
Comments: Too much low mid. EQ is your friend. From 1:30 on a little better. Musically, not much to this. It's just a chord progression over and over with an ARP coming in a little later. Not enough variety to sustain a 5 minute track even with the occasional arrangement changes, dropping of drums, etc. It's just monotonous. A melody would really be nice. Klangy bell stuff towards the end could probably use some LPF. Way too loud.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 388 posts since 20 Mar, 2019
Yeah I see the point about the end being too loud, but I like loud! However not that much though so tweaked it a bit more.wagtunes wrote: ↑Mon Apr 15, 2019 5:03 pm My Feedback
Music - 4
Instruments - 7
Performance - 7
Mix - 6
Overall - 6
Comments: Too much low mid. EQ is your friend. From 1:30 on a little better. Musically, not much to this. It's just a chord progression over and over with an ARP coming in a little later. Not enough variety to sustain a 5 minute track even with the occasional arrangement changes, dropping of drums, etc. It's just monotonous. A melody would really be nice. Klangy bell stuff towards the end could probably use some LPF. Way too loud.
