Aquilyzer - Dive In | Drum & Bass

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72 posts since 30 Mar, 2005

Post Mon Jun 17, 2019 5:59 am
Tried to create a melodic uplifting drum and bass tune. Used FLStudio 20.

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1199 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Mon Jun 17, 2019 2:21 pm

First minute was slow for me. You could chop that in half. Nice build at 1:01>
1:08> very nice section. 1:52 very good breakdown.
2:14-3:18 too samey. For me, something in this time period needs to happen. eg. leave the kick in for a few bars, take the snare etc out. Go up or down in the octave range. Go a 3rd up, a 5th up in the melody. etc. Just something to maintain the interest and keep me engaged there.
Overall though - liked it :tu:

72 posts since 30 Mar, 2005

Post Tue Jun 18, 2019 1:01 am

Thank you for your detailed feedback. :)

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addled muppet weed
68317 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass

Post Thu Jun 20, 2019 9:12 am

is it not more trance than dnb?
i think trying to make it uplifting took it elsewhere as dnb is usually fairly dark, at least the stuff i know.
nice piece of work none the less, very well mixed and a varied enough arrangement for the dance floor 8)

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