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https://soundcloud.com/jethrobull/without

Thank you for listening if you do.
Feedback is appreciated :wink:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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lovely sounds 8)
that throbbing bass is great, doesn't cloud out the mix but is up front for a time, nice work there :tu:
if i was going to complain about anything, and this is a personal preference, im sure you've noticed i enjoy what the kids call "long form" pieces, so for me it was over a little quick.
which is what my gf said last night :cry:

before anyone else says it :hihi:

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Nice sounds and progression!
Heavenly Sounds Approved This.

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vurt wrote: Sun Jun 23, 2019 4:04 pm lovely sounds 8)
that throbbing bass is great, doesn't cloud out the mix but is up front for a time, nice work there :tu:
if i was going to complain about anything, and this is a personal preference, im sure you've noticed i enjoy what the kids call "long form" pieces, so for me it was over a little quick.
which is what my gf said last night :cry:

before anyone else says it :hihi:
Thank you Vurt. I appreciate the listen and feedback :tu: Yep,I heard that sentence from past and present gf too. For me it always the intensity that counted :hihi: . Not sure they agreed though :roll:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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Interesting dark ambience. It seems to mainly suggest loneliness but also a strength.

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Mozex wrote: Sun Jun 23, 2019 7:27 pm Nice sounds and progression!
Thank you Mozex. Really appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment :tu:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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I think I understand where you going with this track but honestly I don’t feel it’s there. Something about the balance, dynamic and the story line not really clear to me.
I’m missing the punch line.

Great job friend.
Check out some of my latest mixes and remixes:https://soundcloud.com/thinkmusic007

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fastlanephil wrote: Mon Jun 24, 2019 11:41 pm Interesting dark ambience. It seems to mainly suggest loneliness but also a strength.
Thank you for taking the time to listen. I appreciate your thoughts :tu:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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Skyfall72 wrote: Tue Jun 25, 2019 6:23 pm I think I understand where you going with this track but honestly I don’t feel it’s there. Something about the balance, dynamic and the story line not really clear to me.
I’m missing the punch line.

Great job friend.
Hey,thank you for taking the time to listen and leave feedback :tu: Unfortunately the story and where this is going is not very clear to me either :hihi:
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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jethrobull wrote: Sun Jun 30, 2019 5:52 am
Skyfall72 wrote: Tue Jun 25, 2019 6:23 pm I think I understand where you going with this track but honestly I don’t feel it’s there. Something about the balance, dynamic and the story line not really clear to me.
I’m missing the punch line.

Great job friend.
Hey,thank you for taking the time to listen and leave feedback :tu: Unfortunately the story and where this is going is not very clear to me either :hihi:
We all suffering from the same thing hahaha
Check out some of my latest mixes and remixes:https://soundcloud.com/thinkmusic007

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My Feedback

Music - 9
Instruments - 10
Performance - 9
Mix - 9.5

Overall - 9.375

Comments: I don't know how I missed this. Glad I finally caught up to it. Very mysterious sounding. Nice mix. Instrumentation is very cool. Would love to know what synths you used for this. All in all, well done.

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Nice work. Very cinematic. I would have liked the bassline to arrive earlier, and a little less "fizz" on the intro (maybe it's the reverb?), but overall it's well a balanced mix and sounds really good.

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quite enjoyed that ...
particularly taken w/ the upper register motif juxtaposed against the staid progression ,
introduced when you bring in the bass ... i'd raise the level of that a bit ...

i concur w/ thecontrolcentre :
'twas a tad 'fizzy' at the intro ...

good work ...
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wagtunes wrote: Sun Jun 30, 2019 9:50 pm My Feedback

Music - 9
Instruments - 10
Performance - 9
Mix - 9.5

Overall - 9.375

Comments: I don't know how I missed this. Glad I finally caught up to it. Very mysterious sounding. Nice mix. Instrumentation is very cool. Would love to know what synths you used for this. All in all, well done.
Hey thank you wags,I really appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment :tu:

Instruments used were:
Pads & Keys: D16 Lush 101 (the bulk of the track really)
Bass: AIR Loom Classic
Choir Ahhh's: Dream Voices Alchemy
Strings : Rapture
Some more Strings,Choir Ahhh's :Air Xpand! 2
The inner workings of vurts mind are a force to be reckoned with.
music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
myfeebleeffort
https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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Ominous , foreboding piece....comes together nicely around the 2:30 mark.

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