A few years back I did my typical absurdist, creep, goofball, anti-social, cringe, shtick. But recently someone with actual talent took it in a very different direction. This supports my theory that behind every thing that has some social relevance, there is a drooling madman.
https://soundcloud.com/tritoneaddiction/dont-lie-to-me
https://youtu.be/IIqbZoTCtZc
(Metal) Don't Lie To Me
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- KVRAF
- 11506 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
I watched the video first, after reading the notes on SoundCloud and YouTube.
PSOYW is interesting. Some of the video FX are quite unsettling, which I assume was your intention. The music was also unsettling, with the modulated synth FX and the "ambient" pads sitting behind a funky synth riff backing up some unconventional vocals, whose melody I thought bore a resemblance to NIИ's Vessel in places.
Speaking of NIИ, I thought "Don't Lie to Me" certainly had a lot of similarities to some of their late '90s and early '00s music. The re-ordering of your original lyrics seems to make more sense, and the re-work was a big success. Nice Sound.
I had completely forgotten about "Out of Touch". I haven''t listened to that in about 35 years.
Good work
PSOYW is interesting. Some of the video FX are quite unsettling, which I assume was your intention. The music was also unsettling, with the modulated synth FX and the "ambient" pads sitting behind a funky synth riff backing up some unconventional vocals, whose melody I thought bore a resemblance to NIИ's Vessel in places.
Speaking of NIИ, I thought "Don't Lie to Me" certainly had a lot of similarities to some of their late '90s and early '00s music. The re-ordering of your original lyrics seems to make more sense, and the re-work was a big success. Nice Sound.
I had completely forgotten about "Out of Touch". I haven''t listened to that in about 35 years.
Good work
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- KVRAF
- 2540 posts since 18 May, 2002 from up on Cripple Creek (CO)
I have no idea what's going on, but I dig it.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 130 posts since 15 Oct, 2019
thanks for the taking the time to leave a well thought out comment.seismic1 wrote: ↑Sun May 09, 2021 9:51 pm I watched the video first, after reading the notes on SoundCloud and YouTube.
PSOYW is interesting. Some of the video FX are quite unsettling, which I assume was your intention. The music was also unsettling, with the modulated synth FX and the "ambient" pads sitting behind a funky synth riff backing up some unconventional vocals, whose melody I thought bore a resemblance to NIИ's Vessel in places.
Speaking of NIИ, I thought "Don't Lie to Me" certainly had a lot of similarities to some of their late '90s and early '00s music. The re-ordering of your original lyrics seems to make more sense, and the re-work was a big success. Nice Sound.
I had completely forgotten about "Out of Touch". I haven''t listened to that in about 35 years.
Good work
I'm slowly working my way over to your's and since it is so long I might just focus on one section of it. I love NIN and vessel is a stand out track to me, a lot of energy in that.
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- addled muppet weed
- 105855 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 130 posts since 15 Oct, 2019
i got this score card that i devised as a result of my new Phil Spector role(fil sphphinktor my new noise handle for the day) that i will use on a section of your newest work and give you feed back that will change your life
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- Banned
- 849 posts since 3 Jul, 2017
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 130 posts since 15 Oct, 2019
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- addled muppet weed
- 105855 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
make me taller?
metal version!
tight! they/he certainly knows his stuff, lots of energy in the right places
really good cover version, the kind i like because it takes the original but does something different! too many people think cover version is "direct copy" and dont put anything of themselves in to it.
video version.
i can see what he means about "no work" in the sense that, there was very little sorting out sets, camera placement and such, just you wandering about, with some playing clips and some film/tv bits, including one of my favourite cartoons of all time so bonus points!!! (have 50!)
but there was plenty of fx abuse, and cutting and editing so there was some work!
and a pretty great track too, my kind of weird! as for putting spells on my wife, how do you think i get them?
little bit of mesmerism hurt noone! ever!
i look forward to the feedback
