KVR Audio

Zeekuh · Post by **Zeekuh** » Tue May 11, 2021 1:17 pm

(V1)
https://soundcloud.com/erik-svensson-31 ... 8H2DE67sH7
Any feedback appreciated

(V2)
https://soundcloud.com/erik-svensson-31 ... b0YKYj5yaw

(V3)
https://soundcloud.com/erik-svensson-31 ... C4VThXPcuU
Regards
Zeekuh

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Wed May 12, 2021 4:34 am

the sync on this seems to be kind of sloppy at the start. song itself is full of standard ol trance sounds and grooves, imo. mix sounds ok tho.

htcnext2 · Post by **htcnext2** » Wed May 12, 2021 4:43 pm

you pushed it to the limit, obviously- not my kind of stuff, but go for it..

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Thu May 13, 2021 1:23 am

I think sound choice is important. And the lead sound that comes in at 0:15 is not the best, and the subsequent piano-like arp is not a great sound choice either. I don't think the piano sound fits.
I like the different nice little FX in there that do add to the interest of the track.
The kick sound is very prominent, but I'm struggling to hear the snare come through. There is a chance to add some nice higher percussion like hats etc. to the chorus and other parts. Changing the percussion up can enhance and create interest so people stay listening.

excuse me please · Post by **excuse me please** » Thu May 13, 2021 2:08 am

Theme is nice, maybe the piano should be more bossa nova.

Zeekuh · Post by **Zeekuh** » Thu May 13, 2021 6:52 am

Thanks for all the input

I made some adjustments
Added some own percussion instead of boring loops that i used before and gave them a lot more focus in the mix.

Bansaw wrote: ↑Thu May 13, 2021 1:23 am I think sound choice is important. And the lead sound that comes in at 0:15 is not the best, and the subsequent piano-like arp is not a great sound choice either. I don't think the piano sound fits.
I like the different nice little FX in there that do add to the interest of the track.
The kick sound is very prominent, but I'm struggling to hear the snare come through. There is a chance to add some nice higher percussion like hats etc. to the chorus and other parts. Changing the percussion up can enhance and create interest so people stay listening.

Changed up the intro lead to a arp synth and replaced the piano with a pluck instead, also adjusted snare volume to make it punch through the mix more.

Here's the v2 (actually remade whole song in new project as i wasnt happy with the mixdown completly, also changed the key think it sounds a bit better in A minor)
https://soundcloud.com/erik-svensson-31 ... b0YKYj5yaw

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Thu May 13, 2021 9:58 pm

Zeekuh wrote: ↑Thu May 13, 2021 6:52 am
Changed up the intro lead to a arp synth and replaced the piano with a pluck instead, also adjusted snare volume to make it punch through the mix more.

Great job.
For me this sounds way better than V1.

Morgaxx · Post by **Morgaxx** » Fri May 14, 2021 11:05 pm

Yeah, that's much butter all over.
5 improvements out of 5!

Zeekuh · Post by **Zeekuh** » Fri May 28, 2021 11:07 am

Made a few more improvements and remade it from scratch
Think it turned out better than v2
https://soundcloud.com/erik-svensson-31 ... C4VThXPcuU

EDM track - looking for feedback