Made this last night, it's got vocals and is some sort of half dark, half bright, synthpop :) It's almost finished

[Mesmerized_Angel]

https://soundcloud.com/user-970418947/because-3

It's a verse and a chorus, but I am working on the rest

It has just gibberish for lyrics right now, but I think I will exchange the lyrics for being about time travel with hints to back to the future as the picture on soundcloud suggests.

Looking for feedback and constructive criticism.

[Bansaw]

Great potential.
However, I hope you're going to arrange it well, drop some instruments out now and then, and highlight the chorus etc. At the moment its a flat arrangement.

[Halonmusic]

cool. the vocals could be louder

[Gabriel_West]

Great Song by you, great vocals, I like it! (Maybe you could make your vocals a little louder)