Transmigration (Rework) Deep Rhythmic Ambient

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Cinebient
KVRAF
3653 posts since 16 Nov, 2014

Post Mon Jun 18, 2018 9:03 am

So...had a bad Monday and what is best to calm down? Yep....create another track.
This time i took one of my favorite rhythmic ambient works and remixed it a bit, added some vocals and other FX and a bit of Moog´s Animoog.
Good headphones are recommended to fall in trance :)
https://soundcloud.com/user-790535032/t ... ion-rework

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wagtunes
KVRAF
13626 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Re: Transmigration (Rework) Deep Rhythmic Ambient

Post Mon Jun 18, 2018 11:28 am

My Feedback

Music - 9
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 9

Overall - 9

Comments: Absolutely loved the way this started. Gotta give me the synths list for this one. LOL. Sorry you had a bad Monday.

Eauson
KVRian
837 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf

Re: Transmigration (Rework) Deep Rhythmic Ambient

Post Mon Jun 18, 2018 2:24 pm

If you live somewhere dry you look forward to the rains, the opening was very nice, almost like unrolling a magical moving picture, with the abstract percs and the slight offsetting of certain elements adding earpleasing variety.

About the only thing which didn't sit well for me was the kick at the beginning, maybe not so heavy, it distracted my listening experience, once the break came in though and you took the kick to a more jaunty non 4*4 it felt a bit better, but lost some context to the rest of the track, its got a lovely floating feel to it, the mix really is solid and played well on headphones. ( it was 50p well spent by me)
Second listen confirmed a pleasant passage of time spent. 8) :clap: :tu:

Liam
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KVRian
893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006

Re: Transmigration (Rework) Deep Rhythmic Ambient

Post Fri Jun 22, 2018 6:13 am

Thoroughly enjoyed listening to it! Overall it was effective and well produced.

I liked the simple kick pattern that faded in early on...gave a stable bed for the whirling complexity above. I think, though, that it faded into a slightly too high level in the mix and was also a little dry for this context. I wouldn't normally advocate anything beyond minimal reverb on a kick, but in this piece I think it needs it.

The more intricate drum pattern towards the end didn't work as well for me...with everything else gong on it became rhythmically slightly messy?

Production-wise - it worked well, but I felt that:

Stereo Spread was too extreme on too many parts maybe?

Use of reverb could have been varied a little more...overall too wet on too many parts which made it a tad too 'mushy'?

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Frantz
KVRAF
4820 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Re: Transmigration (Rework) Deep Rhythmic Ambient

Post Sat Jun 23, 2018 7:13 pm

This is great! All the ingredients are here. With a better mix, it could be amazing. The kick is overpowering. Sometimes too much reverb. A more conventional mix would be less distracting and allow us to focus on the music.

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