Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

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Esgalachoir
KVRian
868 posts since 26 May, 2008 from Colorado

Post Tue Jun 26, 2018 4:47 pm

Many thanks again for the listen and kind words :tu:
:) :tu:

Mushy Mushy
KVRAF
9917 posts since 7 Sep, 2008

Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Post Thu Jun 28, 2018 12:33 pm

Bump before I pull it down to remix over the weekend.
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"

Mushy Mushy
KVRAF
9917 posts since 7 Sep, 2008

Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Post Sat Jun 30, 2018 2:16 am

Remixed to work better on a wider variety of speakers.
https://soundcloud.com/mushy-mushy/twisted-poetry
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"

Mushy Mushy
KVRAF
9917 posts since 7 Sep, 2008

Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Post Sat Jul 14, 2018 10:57 am

Drunkity bumpity
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"

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MFXxx
KVRAF
2865 posts since 27 Mar, 2010 from UK

Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Post Sat Jul 14, 2018 11:13 am

Mate just picked a nice bag of green, will listen to this in more depth and breadth tonight.

From what I heard quickly - you've got a the sound spot on! :hug:
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Mushy Mushy
KVRAF
9917 posts since 7 Sep, 2008

Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Post Sun Jul 15, 2018 5:31 am

MFXxx wrote:Mate just picked a nice bag of green, will listen to this in more depth and breadth tonight.

From what I heard quickly - you've got a the sound spot on! :hug:
Thanks man. Looking forward to your thoughts.
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"

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MFXxx
KVRAF
2865 posts since 27 Mar, 2010 from UK

Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Post Sun Jul 15, 2018 2:32 pm

Love the subtle and textured intro.
Standard punder - nice
Enjoying the bass slide and subtle compression side-chaining.
Liking sfxs!
The synths build nicely into phase 2
Waiting for some vocal stabs/phrases to carve it up...love the break squidgy imploding acid lines!
Ears funbling over that hihat/cymbal rise...lush
...lush two fingers now hypnotically following that saturate acid lead.
Honestly middle part Im starting to drift...ever heard the Frankie Goes To Hollywood Relax sex mix, very similar sound effect to imitate the sound of rubber on rubber!
3.30 mins to 4mins still good work, Im losing interest.
..ah vocals. Seen a wolf with a Rhinos head. Just ran straight through my fooking room...
ALmost 80 styles lead souped up for some psy times coming in, building back to that saturated acid line.
...oooh its building again :) (Josh Wink momenty).

Spot on mate.

Personal notes only -
Bass, was wanting some sub bass line but maybe thats the mood Im in.
The 3-5min could be cut back, maybe even down to a shorter breakdown.
But what do I know ;)
Great work pal.
Hit the mood just nicely, feel in it in the haze :)
Mushy Mushy wrote:
MFXxx wrote:Mate just picked a nice bag of green, will listen to this in more depth and breadth tonight.

From what I heard quickly - you've got a the sound spot on! :hug:
Thanks man. Looking forward to your thoughts.
Image7820x 4.6ghz • 32GB Ram • 1050TI • SSDs & Hybrid Drives • RME FF800 • Adams A7X • Maschine • Analog Keys • Virus TI • JD800 • JV1080 • x0xb0x

Mushy Mushy
KVRAF
9917 posts since 7 Sep, 2008

Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Post Mon Jul 16, 2018 8:14 am

MFXxx wrote:Love the subtle and textured intro.
Standard punder - nice
Enjoying the bass slide and subtle compression side-chaining.
Liking sfxs!
The synths build nicely into phase 2
Waiting for some vocal stabs/phrases to carve it up...love the break squidgy imploding acid lines!
Ears funbling over that hihat/cymbal rise...lush
...lush two fingers now hypnotically following that saturate acid lead.
Honestly middle part Im starting to drift...ever heard the Frankie Goes To Hollywood Relax sex mix, very similar sound effect to imitate the sound of rubber on rubber!
3.30 mins to 4mins still good work, Im losing interest.
..ah vocals. Seen a wolf with a Rhinos head. Just ran straight through my fooking room...
ALmost 80 styles lead souped up for some psy times coming in, building back to that saturated acid line.
...oooh its building again :) (Josh Wink momenty).

Spot on mate.

Personal notes only -
Bass, was wanting some sub bass line but maybe thats the mood Im in.
The 3-5min could be cut back, maybe even down to a shorter breakdown.
But what do I know ;)
Great work pal.
Hit the mood just nicely, feel in it in the haze :)
Wow, now that's some detailed feedback :hyper:

I do agree with the majority of your points and I will revisit the track at some point. For now though I'm focused on a new one to keep me sane.
However I am curious about your comment regarding sub bass because on every system I've played it on it's potentially already too much IMO.

Thanks again, man. Most appreciated :tu:
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"

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MFXxx
KVRAF
2865 posts since 27 Mar, 2010 from UK

Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Post Mon Jul 16, 2018 8:46 am

I had another listen late last night on the 880s and yes I totally agree, enough low end bass (my bad) :)

The production is excellent and well balanced, really cant fault the mix levels and eq across the board.
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Mushy Mushy
KVRAF
9917 posts since 7 Sep, 2008

Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Post Mon Jul 16, 2018 12:34 pm

MFXxx wrote:I had another listen late last night on the 880s and yes I totally agree, enough low end bass (my bad) :)

The production is excellent and well balanced, really cant fault the mix levels and eq across the board.
:tu: Thanks, man.
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"

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