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baalisoda · Post by **baalisoda** » Mon Nov 19, 2018 10:46 am

Good day, friends!

Swinger is a simple jolly dance-able track with some cinematic and retro elements that I have made over the weekend. Do give it a listen, when you can. I hope some of you will like it

Cheers!

https://soundcloud.com/baalisoda/swinger

JazzyClarinetMan · Post by **JazzyClarinetMan** » Mon Nov 19, 2018 9:55 pm

I enjoyed listening but felt that it could have been a little less hectic at times with regard to the layers? It was all a bit too busy - especially some of the melodies that could have been simplified slightly?

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Mon Nov 19, 2018 10:01 pm

a nice electro romp. nice retro elements on the sounds. mix was a bit boomy.

baalisoda · Post by **baalisoda** » Tue Nov 20, 2018 2:32 am

JazzyClarinetMan wrote: ↑Mon Nov 19, 2018 9:55 pm I enjoyed listening but felt that it could have been a little less hectic at times with regard to the layers? It was all a bit too busy - especially some of the melodies that could have been simplified slightly?

Thanks for giving it a listen, will sure work on the elements you have suggested

baalisoda · Post by **baalisoda** » Tue Nov 20, 2018 2:32 am

layzer wrote: ↑Mon Nov 19, 2018 10:01 pm a nice electro romp. nice retro elements on the sounds. mix was a bit boomy.

Thanks for the kind words, my friend. I will try to re-look into the mix

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Wed Nov 21, 2018 8:54 pm

@0:58 bell pluck slightly too forward in the mix, needs some reverb or lowering.
Other than that, very enjoyable. Liked it.

baalisoda · Post by **baalisoda** » Fri Nov 23, 2018 5:06 am

Bansaw wrote: ↑Wed Nov 21, 2018 8:54 pm @0:58 bell pluck slightly too forward in the mix, needs some reverb or lowering.
Other than that, very enjoyable. Liked it.

Thanks for giving it a listen and your valuable suggestion, sir. Will relook into the mix for that bell pluck positioning

htcnext2 · Post by **htcnext2** » Fri Nov 23, 2018 7:39 am

Sounds a bit murky but the 'songwriting' is well done. Cool, alternating synths. Nice work. Greetings NR

Captain Scarne · Post by **Captain Scarne** » Sat Nov 24, 2018 2:01 pm

Very retro.

It works, but I think the tunes are a bit too complex at times - take some notes out dude and then I'll hum them alongside my next goblin hunt.

baalisoda · Post by **baalisoda** » Sun Nov 25, 2018 1:47 pm

htcnext2 wrote: ↑Fri Nov 23, 2018 7:39 am Sounds a bit murky but the 'songwriting' is well done. Cool, alternating synths. Nice work. Greetings NR

Thanks for giving it a listen and your valuable feedback, my friend

(Will sure try to improve on the aspects you have suggessted)

baalisoda · Post by **baalisoda** » Sun Nov 25, 2018 1:48 pm

Captain Scarne wrote: ↑Sat Nov 24, 2018 2:01 pm Very retro.

It works, but I think the tunes are a bit too complex at times - take some notes out dude and then I'll hum them alongside my next goblin hunt.

Very kind of you, will sure see what i can do to make it better