Basislager - Frühling
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 182 posts since 10 Feb, 2005 from Germany
- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
My Feedback
Music - 7
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 8.5
Mix - 9
Overall - 8.25
Comments: Intro is too long. A minute and a half in before the track goes somewhere. But then it doesn't get very far and we're back to the same 4 note motif. Mix is fine. Performance is decent enough but nobody here knows how to compose music. Or maybe music composition is secondary for these EDM genres. I don't know. Maybe I'm just old and should leave the planet already. Anyway, this song said everything it had to say after 2 minutes. And that's only because it took a minute and a half to get there. The sad thing is, the majority of the people here have a good command of their synths and can mix pretty damn good. Add some actual music to the mix and you've got something.
Music - 7
Instruments - 8.5
Performance - 8.5
Mix - 9
Overall - 8.25
Comments: Intro is too long. A minute and a half in before the track goes somewhere. But then it doesn't get very far and we're back to the same 4 note motif. Mix is fine. Performance is decent enough but nobody here knows how to compose music. Or maybe music composition is secondary for these EDM genres. I don't know. Maybe I'm just old and should leave the planet already. Anyway, this song said everything it had to say after 2 minutes. And that's only because it took a minute and a half to get there. The sad thing is, the majority of the people here have a good command of their synths and can mix pretty damn good. Add some actual music to the mix and you've got something.
- KVRist
- 262 posts since 16 Oct, 2016
Needs more SynthWave.
Pretty good. Almost at the level of 'retro' that I find myself gravitating to these days (I guess I am a slave to trends).
Lovely vibe at the 1:00 mark, and the follow-up at 1:33 is just as nice. Would have preferred a more 'wet' retro-sounding snare and clap though.
It sounds complete to me. Granted, minimalist compositions are not everyone's cup-o-tea.
Thanks for sharing. It was a good, early Sunday morning listen.
Pretty good. Almost at the level of 'retro' that I find myself gravitating to these days (I guess I am a slave to trends).
Lovely vibe at the 1:00 mark, and the follow-up at 1:33 is just as nice. Would have preferred a more 'wet' retro-sounding snare and clap though.
It sounds complete to me. Granted, minimalist compositions are not everyone's cup-o-tea.
Thanks for sharing. It was a good, early Sunday morning listen.
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Adrian Earnshaw Music Adrian Earnshaw Music https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=9148
- KVRian
- 766 posts since 23 Sep, 2003 from UK
As an electronic minimalist piece, it works nicely but I didn't get any feeling of spring from it. Mix is nice, tight and well rounded.
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- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
it needs... well... i dunno... i'm thinkin.... what if... you know...
i'm leaning a little toward... just maybe... if we could have...
this is just a shot in the dark.. a little more.... wagbell?
i gotta have more wagbell!
i'm leaning a little toward... just maybe... if we could have...
this is just a shot in the dark.. a little more.... wagbell?
i gotta have more wagbell!
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SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
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HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
- KVRAF
- 1988 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
I like the analog/retro sound, but there's simply not enough happening to keep me interested.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 182 posts since 10 Feb, 2005 from Germany
Thanx for your comments! Yes i have to do some more sounds and mastering.