Faxe Sperlenbacher - Run 4 Nothing (Club Mix)
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faxesperlenbacher faxesperlenbacher https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=441131
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 53 posts since 17 May, 2019
hello guys, here's my latest effort a techno-trance style song from the 90s / '00s I hope you like it! Greetings from Italy
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LuWWsBDppzM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LuWWsBDppzM
- KVRAF
- 1988 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
From 2:20 > you could keep the melody and progression & change some of sounds to more retro, slow down the bmp a little, and you'd have Italo disco!
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- KVRian
- 884 posts since 3 Jan, 2016
It sounds like a decent EDM tune. Pretty minimalistic but it works for me.
- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
My Feedback
Music - 7
Instruments - 8
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 8.5
Overall - 7.75
Comments: Cliche'd EDM track without much going on in it. I don't mind minimalist but this does very little for me, especially at 5 minutes in length. Really needs more to it. After a minute and a half I was already bored. By the time the melody comes in it's too late. I've already turned the station. The song should have ended at about 3 minutes tops.
Music - 7
Instruments - 8
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 8.5
Overall - 7.75
Comments: Cliche'd EDM track without much going on in it. I don't mind minimalist but this does very little for me, especially at 5 minutes in length. Really needs more to it. After a minute and a half I was already bored. By the time the melody comes in it's too late. I've already turned the station. The song should have ended at about 3 minutes tops.
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faxesperlenbacher faxesperlenbacher https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=441131
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 53 posts since 17 May, 2019
wagtunes wrote: ↑Mon May 20, 2019 1:42 am My Feedback
Music - 7
Instruments - 8
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 8.5
Overall - 7.75
Comments: Cliche'd EDM track without much going on in it. I don't mind minimalist but this does very little for me, especially at 5 minutes in length. Really needs more to it. After a minute and a half I was already bored. By the time the melody comes in it's too late. I've already turned the station. The song should have ended at about 3 minutes tops.
thank you very much for the careful criticism. In fact the song is really very simple from the melodic / instrumental point of view, but I wanted precisely to follow those simple sounds and drafts typical of the techno / trance of the 90s / '00s, thanks again for your evaluation that will allow me to improve
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faxesperlenbacher faxesperlenbacher https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=441131
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 53 posts since 17 May, 2019
right observation in fact the EDM of today is nothing but the commercial techno / trance of the 90s / '00 but slowed to 128 bpmfastlanephil wrote: ↑Mon May 20, 2019 12:15 am It sounds like a decent EDM tune. Pretty minimalistic but it works for me.
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faxesperlenbacher faxesperlenbacher https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=441131
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 53 posts since 17 May, 2019