What need change
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 598 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden
Hi. Will someone say what need to be changed, or you think
kust erease it.
Thankful for help.
https://soundcloud.com/pgvpgv333
Chicago
kust erease it.
Thankful for help.
https://soundcloud.com/pgvpgv333
Chicago
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 598 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden
Only of the Chicago song! Of course.
- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
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Music - 4
Instruments - 6
Performance - 3
Mix - 1
Overall - 3.5
Comments: Drums are dead. Total mud. Musically, I have no idea what to make of it. Sounds like a bunch of random notes to me. Mix is uneven. Some parts too loud, some parts too soft. Needs major work.
Music - 4
Instruments - 6
Performance - 3
Mix - 1
Overall - 3.5
Comments: Drums are dead. Total mud. Musically, I have no idea what to make of it. Sounds like a bunch of random notes to me. Mix is uneven. Some parts too loud, some parts too soft. Needs major work.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 598 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden
Thanks wagtunes
- KVRAF
- 25053 posts since 20 Oct, 2007 from gonesville
The rhythmic stuff has possibilities but compositionally this is kind of a mess. Also the synth boops and so forth are atonal mostly and not in the good way, and there are a number of pretty dead spots where forward movement is concerned.
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- KVRAF
- 2396 posts since 28 Sep, 2012
Ha, I think it’s great.
I would love to hear you take it somewhere more structured, change the key, and then break it back down again. Clean up the low end a bit.
I like the second track even more.
I would love to hear you take it somewhere more structured, change the key, and then break it back down again. Clean up the low end a bit.
I like the second track even more.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 598 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden
Thanks all, just went into a lifelong depression!
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- KVRAF
- 2396 posts since 28 Sep, 2012
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 598 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden
Perpetual you are a pearl. Back on the road again. Got to make it to this mounths chipmunk.
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- KVRAF
- 35163 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny
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- KVRer
- 26 posts since 23 Jun, 2019
I really like the sound that reminds me a little bit of a mario game that spawned in the middle of the track, I felt they fit good into the track. It is the steely like sound. I wonder how you made it! Other then that, I don't really feel where the track is going, if you know what I mean. Hilsen en fyr fra Norge
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 598 posts since 3 Dec, 2005 from Sweden
Thanks Guy. Nice you like it. Dont remember how i got the sound. If you want to listen to more, I am Woodpeckerman on Youtube and Spotify