https://youtu.be/uqKC6PyjGU4
I HAVE CORRECTED THE VOLUME AND GIVEN A LITTLE ATTENTION TO THE MIXING, WHAT DO YOU THINK? THANK YOU
★ TECHINACAL INFO ★
D.A.W. : ImageLine - Fl Studio 20
Drums : Arturia SparkLE – Various Samples
Bass : IK Multimedia SampleTank 3
Guitar : MusicLab Real LPC 3
Brass : Korg - M1 (VST Version)
Master FX : IK Multimedia T-Racks CS 4 & Waves Abbey Road Vinyl
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★ DOWNLOAD AREA ★
Free Download (Wave Format) :
https://mega.nz/#!YvRRhSgR!neVhVe_FLtg7 ... qPgw8rTdqE
Free FLP Download :
https://mega.nz/#!gnQxyQrZ!H9jXDV8IEB1Q ... qjzbuDQcao
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★ CONTACT ME ★
M@IL : faxesperlenbacher@gmail.com
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(House) Faxe Sperlenbacher - Come And Fly With Me (Ci Pensa Faxe Extended Mix)
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faxesperlenbacher faxesperlenbacher https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=441131
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 53 posts since 17 May, 2019
Last edited by faxesperlenbacher on Sun Jun 16, 2019 12:35 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
My Feedback
Music - 3
Instruments - 3
Performance - 5
Mix - 1
Overall - 3
Comments: Mix is totally dead. Volume is barely audible. There is zero top end to this. Musically, it took a minute and a half before getting out of the loop that went nowhere. Needs tons of work.
Music - 3
Instruments - 3
Performance - 5
Mix - 1
Overall - 3
Comments: Mix is totally dead. Volume is barely audible. There is zero top end to this. Musically, it took a minute and a half before getting out of the loop that went nowhere. Needs tons of work.
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faxesperlenbacher faxesperlenbacher https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=441131
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 53 posts since 17 May, 2019
thank you very much for the feedback, in fact the track I made in 2 hours and it was just for fun 
was to make more sense to this track https://soundcloud.com/alessio222/clap-your-hands made by a forum tool, and I wanted to try and give the piece a little life
was to make more sense to this track https://soundcloud.com/alessio222/clap-your-hands made by a forum tool, and I wanted to try and give the piece a little life-
faxesperlenbacher faxesperlenbacher https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=441131
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 53 posts since 17 May, 2019
https://youtu.be/LjoGPEyXoR8
I HAVE CORRECTED THE VOLUME AND GIVEN A LITTLE ATTENTION TO THE MIXING, WHAT DO YOU THINK? THANK YOU
I HAVE CORRECTED THE VOLUME AND GIVEN A LITTLE ATTENTION TO THE MIXING, WHAT DO YOU THINK? THANK YOU
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- KVRAF
- 1988 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
Its got potential.
Between 0:17 and 1:27 - there's a whole minute of the same loop over and over again. People won't have that attention span, and switch it off probably. There needs to be the right amount of variety to keep people engaged: chord changes, melody changes, energy changes, builds, drops, - all of which your song lacks enough of.
Not trying to be too critical, just hoping to be constructive.
Between 0:17 and 1:27 - there's a whole minute of the same loop over and over again. People won't have that attention span, and switch it off probably. There needs to be the right amount of variety to keep people engaged: chord changes, melody changes, energy changes, builds, drops, - all of which your song lacks enough of.
Not trying to be too critical, just hoping to be constructive.
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faxesperlenbacher faxesperlenbacher https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=441131
- KVRist
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- 53 posts since 17 May, 2019
The Same Loop???? Listend "daft punk - around the world" or " daft punt - rock and roll" , it's the same "loop"...!!!
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- KVRAF
- 1988 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
Listen to the first 1 minute of "around the world" again.faxesperlenbacher wrote: ↑Sun Jun 16, 2019 10:03 pm The Same Loop???? Listend "daft punk - around the world" or " daft punt - rock and roll" , it's the same "loop"...!!!
You hear it starting with an underwater EQ, then @0:25 you've got a 1-bar repeater, @:0:32 you've got a white noise riser, at 0:34 you've got a +bass emphasis, @0:49 you've got a funky stab synth coming in, @0:52 you've got a melody change, @1:04 you have a vocal element... etc etc.
Its not the same loop over and over again, there are micro changes every few bars to keep you engaged.
