I Got Enemies
- KVRAF
- 21195 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
The backing track is too soft and the lead is too loud. The vocals also need to come up more and be EQ'd a bit so you can hear and understand all the lyrics.
Musically, a generic blues progression and lyrically childish. I have to wonder how much thought actually went into doing this. At least some kind of a bridge or something to break up the monotony. At almost 5 minutes it's way too long without more variation.
Of course no doubt that song was done as a joke anyway, so on that level I guess it works.
Musically, a generic blues progression and lyrically childish. I have to wonder how much thought actually went into doing this. At least some kind of a bridge or something to break up the monotony. At almost 5 minutes it's way too long without more variation.
Of course no doubt that song was done as a joke anyway, so on that level I guess it works.
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1268 posts since 12 Aug, 2004
No Joke...but this ditty is over 10 years old. Maybe I learned something … maybe not. Who gives a shit ? I don't fancy myself a musician, songwriter, or producer. I'm just doin' my thang till the cancer takes me. Then they can bury me face down (just like Elvis) so the world can kiss my bi-racial ass!wagtunes wrote: ↑Mon Jul 08, 2019 7:55 pm The backing track is too soft and the lead is too loud. The vocals also need to come up more and be EQ'd a bit so you can hear and understand all the lyrics.
Musically, a generic blues progression and lyrically childish. I have to wonder how much thought actually went into doing this. At least some kind of a bridge or something to break up the monotony. At almost 5 minutes it's way too long without more variation.
Of course no doubt that song was done as a joke anyway, so on that level I guess it works.
- KVRAF
- 21195 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Can I ask a really stupid question? You say you're not a musician and don't give a shit. Fair enough. But you're posting songs in a forum where people go to listen to music and, supposedly comment on it. And when they do, they're not going to care if you're a musician or not. They're going to judge the work on its own value.Karma_tba wrote: ↑Mon Jul 08, 2019 8:21 pmNo Joke...but this ditty is over 10 years old. Maybe I learned something … maybe not. Who gives a shit ? I don't fancy myself a musician, songwriter, or producer. I'm just doin' my thang till the cancer takes me. Then they can bury me face down (just like Elvis) so the world can kiss my bi-racial ass!wagtunes wrote: ↑Mon Jul 08, 2019 7:55 pm The backing track is too soft and the lead is too loud. The vocals also need to come up more and be EQ'd a bit so you can hear and understand all the lyrics.
Musically, a generic blues progression and lyrically childish. I have to wonder how much thought actually went into doing this. At least some kind of a bridge or something to break up the monotony. At almost 5 minutes it's way too long without more variation.
Of course no doubt that song was done as a joke anyway, so on that level I guess it works.
My point is, our problems all started because I criticized your work. Not you. Your work. But you took it personally and since then you've been very nasty to me, which I don't think I deserved.
Anyway, FWIW, I hope you beat the big C. It's a horrible disease and I've lost many friends and family to it. I wouldn't wish it on my worst enemy. I certainly don't wish it on you. But I won't let you verbally abuse me. That's where I draw the line, which is why I had put you on ignore. I'd prefer not to and actually have a civilized conversation with you. If you'd rather not, that's fine too. But I wish the hostility between us could just end already.
It's up to you.
Wishing you the best on your fight.
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- KVRAF
- 15513 posts since 13 Oct, 2009
Is this song about fellatio too, because that's the vibe I'm getting?
- KVRAF
- 21195 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Have you taken a look at the first page of this sub forum?ghettosynth wrote: ↑Tue Jul 09, 2019 12:34 am Is this song about fellatio too, because that's the vibe I'm getting?
isn't that bordering on spamming? Just saying.
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- addled muppet weed
- 105768 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
spam and fellatio?wagtunes wrote: ↑Tue Jul 09, 2019 12:50 amHave you taken a look at the first page of this sub forum?ghettosynth wrote: ↑Tue Jul 09, 2019 12:34 am Is this song about fellatio too, because that's the vibe I'm getting?
isn't that bordering on spamming? Just saying.
pervert.
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- addled muppet weed
- 105768 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
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- KVRAF
- 15513 posts since 13 Oct, 2009
- KVRAF
- 21195 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
No offense Ghetto but I'm not seeing the humor here. Whatever problems he has with me and Jan, and now it seems Vurt, spamming the forum is an attack on the forum itself and shouldn't be excused.
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1268 posts since 12 Aug, 2004
You like many others (jancivil)read me wrong. It was never about your criticism of me. It's way you come off, always talking about your self. Your 40 years, your sound design, the number of synths you possess, or intend to buy next. The way you review with you numerical system like we should all be judged against your standard . I remember reading a review you did where you gave two sentences to the song you were reviewing then went on to talk about yourself for two pages. Maybe this may mean nothing to you but it rubs some the wrong way. Much like jancivil thinks that her verbose posts some how make her superior. When she has a teaching moment she instead ridicules. If you guys are to be respected for your musicology don't flaunt it and demean.wagtunes wrote: ↑Tue Jul 09, 2019 12:14 amCan I ask a really stupid question? You say you're not a musician and don't give a shit. Fair enough. But you're posting songs in a forum where people go to listen to music and, supposedly comment on it. And when they do, they're not going to care if you're a musician or not. They're going to judge the work on its own value.Karma_tba wrote: ↑Mon Jul 08, 2019 8:21 pmNo Joke...but this ditty is over 10 years old. Maybe I learned something … maybe not. Who gives a shit ? I don't fancy myself a musician, songwriter, or producer. I'm just doin' my thang till the cancer takes me. Then they can bury me face down (just like Elvis) so the world can kiss my bi-racial ass!wagtunes wrote: ↑Mon Jul 08, 2019 7:55 pm The backing track is too soft and the lead is too loud. The vocals also need to come up more and be EQ'd a bit so you can hear and understand all the lyrics.
Musically, a generic blues progression and lyrically childish. I have to wonder how much thought actually went into doing this. At least some kind of a bridge or something to break up the monotony. At almost 5 minutes it's way too long without more variation.
Of course no doubt that song was done as a joke anyway, so on that level I guess it works.
My point is, our problems all started because I criticized your work. Not you. Your work. But you took it personally and since then you've been very nasty to me, which I don't think I deserved.
Anyway, FWIW, I hope you beat the big C. It's a horrible disease and I've lost many friends and family to it. I wouldn't wish it on my worst enemy. I certainly don't wish it on you. But I won't let you verbally abuse me. That's where I draw the line, which is why I had put you on ignore. I'd prefer not to and actually have a civilized conversation with you. If you'd rather not, that's fine too. But I wish the hostility between us could just end already.
It's up to you.
Wishing you the best on your fight.
- KVRAF
- 21195 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Well, that was never my intention. If I came off that way, I'm sorry.Karma_tba wrote: ↑Tue Jul 09, 2019 1:03 amYou like many others (jancivil)read me wrong. It was never about your criticism of me. It's way you come off, always talking about your self. Your 40 years, your sound design, the number of synths you possess, or intend to buy next. The way you review with you numerical system like we should all be judged against your standard . I remember reading a review you did where you gave two sentences to the song you were reviewing then went on to talk about yourself for two pages. Maybe this may mean nothing to you but it rubs some the wrong way. Much like jancivil thinks that her verbose posts some how make her superior. When she has a teaching moment she instead ridicules. If you guys are to be respected for your musicology don't flaunt it and demean.wagtunes wrote: ↑Tue Jul 09, 2019 12:14 amCan I ask a really stupid question? You say you're not a musician and don't give a shit. Fair enough. But you're posting songs in a forum where people go to listen to music and, supposedly comment on it. And when they do, they're not going to care if you're a musician or not. They're going to judge the work on its own value.Karma_tba wrote: ↑Mon Jul 08, 2019 8:21 pmNo Joke...but this ditty is over 10 years old. Maybe I learned something … maybe not. Who gives a shit ? I don't fancy myself a musician, songwriter, or producer. I'm just doin' my thang till the cancer takes me. Then they can bury me face down (just like Elvis) so the world can kiss my bi-racial ass!wagtunes wrote: ↑Mon Jul 08, 2019 7:55 pm The backing track is too soft and the lead is too loud. The vocals also need to come up more and be EQ'd a bit so you can hear and understand all the lyrics.
Musically, a generic blues progression and lyrically childish. I have to wonder how much thought actually went into doing this. At least some kind of a bridge or something to break up the monotony. At almost 5 minutes it's way too long without more variation.
Of course no doubt that song was done as a joke anyway, so on that level I guess it works.
My point is, our problems all started because I criticized your work. Not you. Your work. But you took it personally and since then you've been very nasty to me, which I don't think I deserved.
Anyway, FWIW, I hope you beat the big C. It's a horrible disease and I've lost many friends and family to it. I wouldn't wish it on my worst enemy. I certainly don't wish it on you. But I won't let you verbally abuse me. That's where I draw the line, which is why I had put you on ignore. I'd prefer not to and actually have a civilized conversation with you. If you'd rather not, that's fine too. But I wish the hostility between us could just end already.
It's up to you.
Wishing you the best on your fight.
Anyway, where we go from here is up to you.
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- KVRAF
- 15513 posts since 13 Oct, 2009
Sorry, man, that shit's funny. KVR is off the rails today.
- KVRAF
- 21195 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Today? When is KVR NOT off the rails?ghettosynth wrote: ↑Tue Jul 09, 2019 1:19 amSorry, man, that shit's funny. KVR is off the rails today.