Darksynth FX - Secrets of the Universe (80s, Synthwave)
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 217 posts since 15 May, 2016 from Vienna
Would love to get some feedback on the mix/song. Be gentle - I'm a woman!
https://soundcloud.com/darksynth-fx/dar ... se/s-q4AnY
https://soundcloud.com/darksynth-fx/dar ... se/s-q4AnY
Dark synth producer.
https://soundcloud.com/darksynth-fx
https://soundcloud.com/darksynth-fx
- KVRAF
- 1985 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
Nice voice. I liked the track. It was a nice touch when you went into a speaking voice at 1:20. Reminded me of Living On Video by Trans-X somewhat.
At 0:34 I see someone commented on your Soundcloud that they liked the mid-high range FX pad, but I would have to disagree and say I didn't like it. The type of sound is a good idea. Maybe an EQ on it or something on it would tame it a little bit.
The low end: I am wondering if it could be more beefy. Perhaps someone else could comment on that - I am at work on crap headphones so can't really judge the low freqs well.
Overall good though - hope to hear more from you.
edit: just got home listened to it again. The Pad FX at 0:34 sounds a bit better here, but still clashing with the lead synth a little. I'd still EQ it down.
Bass: the low end could be thicker.
At 0:34 I see someone commented on your Soundcloud that they liked the mid-high range FX pad, but I would have to disagree and say I didn't like it. The type of sound is a good idea. Maybe an EQ on it or something on it would tame it a little bit.
The low end: I am wondering if it could be more beefy. Perhaps someone else could comment on that - I am at work on crap headphones so can't really judge the low freqs well.
Overall good though - hope to hear more from you.
edit: just got home listened to it again. The Pad FX at 0:34 sounds a bit better here, but still clashing with the lead synth a little. I'd still EQ it down.
Bass: the low end could be thicker.
Last edited by Bansaw on Fri Jul 12, 2019 9:32 pm, edited 1 time in total.
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 217 posts since 15 May, 2016 from Vienna
Thx a lot for the comments! New version is up, added a discreet sub bass and EQed the "laaa" effects starting at 0:34.
Dark synth producer.
https://soundcloud.com/darksynth-fx
https://soundcloud.com/darksynth-fx
- KVRAF
- 21195 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
My Feedback
Music - 9
Instruments - 9
Performance - 10
Mix - 9
Overall - 9.25
Comments: Volume can be brought down a db. Other than that, no complaints. Well done.
Music - 9
Instruments - 9
Performance - 10
Mix - 9
Overall - 9.25
Comments: Volume can be brought down a db. Other than that, no complaints. Well done.
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 217 posts since 15 May, 2016 from Vienna
Thanks a lot for your feedback wagtunes. Seems I'm on the right track.
Dark synth producer.
https://soundcloud.com/darksynth-fx
https://soundcloud.com/darksynth-fx
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- addled muppet weed
- 105790 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
- KVRist
- 239 posts since 7 Apr, 2017 from Fremont, California
IMHO, this is one of your best efforts. Vocals gives me the vibe early 90s eurodance, really enjoyed listening.
Cheers!
Cheers!