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kloon
KVRist
228 posts since 25 Nov, 2013

Post Wed Dec 11, 2019 10:28 pm

New song, done to the best of my abilitiles. Hope you like, thanks for listening. :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UgUNhYx8-eE

Spotify Url.
https://open.spotify.com/track/68LXSIiLTiyAzQsYRLJTXz

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crimsonwarlock
KVRAF
2291 posts since 18 Apr, 2001 from The Netherlands

Post Wed Dec 11, 2019 10:45 pm

Me like :D

Nice mix and pretty professional production as well. Radio Ready I would say.
CrimsonWarlock aka TechnoGremlin, using Reaper and a fine selection of freeware plugins.

Ragnarök VST-synthesizer co-creator with Full Bucket

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ariston
KVRAF
3677 posts since 28 Jun, 2009 from Wherever I lay my hat

Post Wed Dec 11, 2019 10:56 pm

Well, that was a pleasant Thursday morning listen! A well-constructed, simple pop song that makes the most of that sus4 chord that U2 and Coldplay utilize so well. I like how you gave your voice centre stage in the mix.
Personal preference: the sound was too reverb-y for my taste, which gives it an 80s vibe that might be intentional (?). The composition and arrangement could use a bit more complexity, something unexpected to make it stand out more. Still, for what it is, a really nice tune. Well done!

kloon
KVRist
228 posts since 25 Nov, 2013

Post Wed Dec 11, 2019 11:00 pm

crimsonwarlock wrote:
Wed Dec 11, 2019 10:45 pm
Me like :D

Nice mix and pretty professional production as well. Radio Ready I would say.
Thank you very much! :)
ariston wrote:
Wed Dec 11, 2019 10:56 pm
Well, that was a pleasant Thursday morning listen! A well-constructed, simple pop song that makes the most of that sus4 chord that U2 and Coldplay utilize so well. I like how you gave your voice centre stage in the mix.
Personal preference: the sound was too reverb-y for my taste, which gives it an 80s vibe that might be intentional (?). The composition and arrangement could use a bit more complexity, something unexpected to make it stand out more. Still, for what it is, a really nice tune. Well done!
Thank you very much for your feedback and kind words. Very interesting to read. Regarding the reverb, yeah im hopelessly stuck in the 80´s.

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crimsonwarlock
KVRAF
2291 posts since 18 Apr, 2001 from The Netherlands

Post Thu Dec 12, 2019 2:16 am

kloon wrote:
Wed Dec 11, 2019 11:00 pm
Regarding the reverb, yeah im hopelessly stuck in the 80´s.
For a moment I thought to point to the vocal reverb, but it actually sounded intentional to me... and I'm very much stuck in that era sound-wise as well :D
CrimsonWarlock aka TechnoGremlin, using Reaper and a fine selection of freeware plugins.

Ragnarök VST-synthesizer co-creator with Full Bucket

kloon
KVRist
228 posts since 25 Nov, 2013

Post Thu Dec 12, 2019 2:43 am

crimsonwarlock wrote:
Thu Dec 12, 2019 2:16 am
kloon wrote:
Wed Dec 11, 2019 11:00 pm
Regarding the reverb, yeah im hopelessly stuck in the 80´s.
For a moment I thought to point to the vocal reverb, but it actually sounded intentional to me... and I'm very much stuck in that era sound-wise as well :D
Yeah, i've tried a million times to sound more modern but always fail miserably. :D

enCiphered
KVRian
895 posts since 13 Dec, 2016

Post Thu Dec 12, 2019 2:53 am

kloon wrote:
Wed Dec 11, 2019 10:28 pm
New song, done to the best of my abilitiles. Hope you like, thanks for listening. :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UgUNhYx8-eE

Spotify Url.
https://open.spotify.com/track/68LXSIiLTiyAzQsYRLJTXz
This is the very first track here that has a perfect loudness. Congratulations, really a pleasure to listen to! Most of the track submissions are overmastered, oversaturated, unlistenable. The song is very good in all aspects of composition, mix and mastering. Well done and all the best to you!

kloon
KVRist
228 posts since 25 Nov, 2013

Post Thu Dec 12, 2019 5:27 am

enCiphered wrote:
Thu Dec 12, 2019 2:53 am
kloon wrote:
Wed Dec 11, 2019 10:28 pm
New song, done to the best of my abilitiles. Hope you like, thanks for listening. :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UgUNhYx8-eE

Spotify Url.
https://open.spotify.com/track/68LXSIiLTiyAzQsYRLJTXz
This is the very first track here that has a perfect loudness. Congratulations, really a pleasure to listen to! Most of the track submissions are overmastered, oversaturated, unlistenable. The song is very good in all aspects of composition, mix and mastering. Well done and all the best to you!
Thank you very much, very kind of you. :)

thedeadsoul
KVRist
290 posts since 22 Oct, 2009 from Bandung, Indonesia

Post Thu Dec 12, 2019 8:31 am

Nice tune. I'm also stuck in 80s 90s :D I imagine this song plays at the end credit of an 80s movie, with a car driving while zooming out, credit starts rolling..

Very nice vibe 👍

Best,
Adi/Thedeadsoul

kloon
KVRist
228 posts since 25 Nov, 2013

Post Thu Dec 12, 2019 10:10 am

thedeadsoul wrote:
Thu Dec 12, 2019 8:31 am
Nice tune. I'm also stuck in 80s 90s :D I imagine this song plays at the end credit of an 80s movie, with a car driving while zooming out, credit starts rolling..

Very nice vibe 👍

Best,
Adi/Thedeadsoul
Thank you very much Adi! :)

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Frantz
KVRAF
5395 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Post Sat Dec 14, 2019 12:39 pm

Great tune. Excellent clear mix. :tu:

(I would have liked the drums to be a little louder with some fills and variations.)

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wagtunes
KVRAF
19703 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Post Sat Dec 14, 2019 12:52 pm

I agree with Frantz. Drums could be a little louder. But mix is nice and clean and clear. Very good song and very well done. I'm genuinely impressed. Good luck with it.

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Bansaw
KVRian
1199 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Sat Dec 14, 2019 2:21 pm

Like the vocals, the lyrics have a message.
Could have done with a "bridge" somewhere, with a contrasting vibe.
But, overall really, really liked it. :tu:

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thecontrolcentre
KVRAF
27770 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny

Post Sat Dec 14, 2019 2:31 pm

Nice song, well performed and arranged, but everything sounds a long. long way away (too much overall reverb imho), especially the guitars and drums ... unless that's the intention of course. :)

kloon
KVRist
228 posts since 25 Nov, 2013

Post Sat Dec 14, 2019 7:23 pm

Thank you very much Frantz, wagtunes, Bansaw & thecontrolcentre for your kind words and feedback. :)
Will take the feedback with me on future songs.

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