Ignorant Fool
- KVRAF
- 21191 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Something different. Cool.
- KVRAF
- 21191 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Yeah, definitely reminds me of Lou Reed.
- KVRAF
- 1980 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
I would not have the rattling percussive sound in every bar. I think it makes things a little messy.
However, apart from that I really like this track. I love the vibe, the story. The guitar and sax are good. I think this is one of your best ones.
However, apart from that I really like this track. I love the vibe, the story. The guitar and sax are good. I think this is one of your best ones.
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1268 posts since 12 Aug, 2004
After listening with a focus on that sound I could hear what you mean. Thanks for the heads up. Happy Nu Year!
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- KVRAF
- 16368 posts since 24 May, 2009 from A galaxy, far far away
This is a much more complete and measured performance from you. There are certain issues that could do with being tightened up, to really elevate this; if for no other reason than to do justice to what you already have (Definitely feels like you've put a lot into this one)
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1268 posts since 12 Aug, 2004
Never sure what to say because each piece I do only gets the effort equal to the enjoyment that it brings me. Glad you seem to like it I liked it too.el-bo (formerly ebow) wrote: ↑Sun Jan 05, 2020 9:29 pm This is a much more complete and measured performance from you. There are certain issues that could do with being tightened up, to really elevate this; if for no other reason than to do justice to what you already have (Definitely feels like you've put a lot into this one)
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el-bo (formerly ebow) el-bo (formerly ebow) https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=208007
- KVRAF
- 16368 posts since 24 May, 2009 from A galaxy, far far away
I get it. It's a shame, thoughKarma_tba wrote: ↑Mon Jan 06, 2020 5:29 amNever sure what to say because each piece I do I only gets the effort equal to the enjoyment that it brings me. Glad you seem to like it I liked it too.el-bo (formerly ebow) wrote: ↑Sun Jan 05, 2020 9:29 pm This is a much more complete and measured performance from you. There are certain issues that could do with being tightened up, to really elevate this; if for no other reason than to do justice to what you already have (Definitely feels like you've put a lot into this one)