Tribute to an electronic pioneer "Sequentium please"

[Gucky]

Today I had fun to make a song to an electronic pioneer called "Sequentium please".
But it is a little bit shorter than he does his tracks.
Guess who I mean.
Hope you like it.
Your feedback is welcome.
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/sequentium-please

[Vertlain]

Nice tune, static, but has a calming effect, I'd probably drift off if it was twice as long.

[Gucky]

Hi Vertlain, thanks for your feedback.
Here is now an updated version. I added a brass section at the end.
Hope you like it.
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/sequentium-please

[vurt]

im hearing a little schulze? is that the pioneer?

enjoyable piece whoever the tribute is for

[Erisian]

Loved it. Calming and ambient, like a walk through an enchanted forest.

[Gucky]

Hi vurt, Hi Erisian,
thanks for your feedback!
Yes, I had Klaus Schulze in my mind when I wrote this track.

[mystahr]

Very very nice.
I only felt the kick to be a bit too bland.
some soft reverb and good eq'ing will put is better in the mix.
Overall quite the comforting tune

[Gucky]

Hi mystahr,
thanks for the tip with the kick.
I added now a more reverb on the kick.
I also added a high arp voice at the end.
I hope you like it.
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/sequentium-please

[vurt]

Hi vurt, Hi Erisian,
thanks for your feedback!
Yes, I had Klaus Schulze in my mind when I wrote this track.

well you certainly succeeded in capturing the feel
nice work.