Fragile Gods - "Two Worlds"
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6322 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
A dark and dancy synthpop tune. Aika Zabala provided additional vocals and magic.
https://youtu.be/-lJu59eLxEo
https://soundcloud.com/fragilegods/twoworlds
Two Worlds on Spotify
Any feedback is appreciated. The lyrics are on Soundcloud. Thanks for listening.
https://youtu.be/-lJu59eLxEo
https://soundcloud.com/fragilegods/twoworlds
Two Worlds on Spotify
Any feedback is appreciated. The lyrics are on Soundcloud. Thanks for listening.
Last edited by Frantz on Sun Aug 02, 2020 4:48 pm, edited 3 times in total.
- Banned
- 849 posts since 3 Jul, 2017
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- KVRAF
- 2583 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany
Really nice! Very rhythmic with an incredibly inspiring voice.
Well rounded composition.
The very deep vocal fragments at 2:00 give the whole thing
something mysterious. The song is almost a bit too short,
which is great!
Well rounded composition.
The very deep vocal fragments at 2:00 give the whole thing
something mysterious. The song is almost a bit too short,
which is great!
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- KVRAF
- 21195 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Ah, it's always nice to hear new stuff from you. I know I'm gonna like it before I even put it on. Still love that voice of yours. So cool sounding. In this one you have a little Lou Reed poking out.
Anyway, great mix as always. Love the synth work and the background voices. I could absolutely imagine this on the radio in the 80s.
Anyway, great mix as always. Love the synth work and the background voices. I could absolutely imagine this on the radio in the 80s.
- KVRAF
- 1985 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
Like it. Beginning reminded me of Depeche Mode somewhat.
I think the female vocal adds to the song in terms of relationship, and tension and she has a quality voice. She did the vowel sounds "Ah" good.
1:44 change of chord, I'm still trying to think if I like that or not. It does create some contrast though.
2:24 nice delay pluck
I must get myself a female vocalist!
I think the female vocal adds to the song in terms of relationship, and tension and she has a quality voice. She did the vowel sounds "Ah" good.
1:44 change of chord, I'm still trying to think if I like that or not. It does create some contrast though.
2:24 nice delay pluck
I must get myself a female vocalist!
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6322 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
Thanks for the listen! I thought it needed a little wonkiness there as a change of pace.
(I may work on this mix a bit more. I think the chorus could use a bit of EQ'ing.)
- KVRAF
- 1626 posts since 28 Oct, 2005 from Finland
Nice stuff. Enjoyable to listen to well done song. Sounds good.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6322 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
I'm glad you enjoyed the composition and vocals.
I did keep try to keep it short and interesting. The longer I worked on it, the more sections I removed to prevent boredom from setting in. If I worked on it for another a month, the song might have ended up 10 seconds long.
Thanks for your comments.
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- KVRist
- 37 posts since 25 Jun, 2020
nice! vocals could use a little less highs IMO but other than that sounds great! Keep it up!
- KVRAF
- 4645 posts since 1 Aug, 2005 from Warszawa, Poland
Smells like 80s, especially the break at 2:00. That's always a good thing, more so as 80's are becoming somewhat distant past.
- KVRAF
- 25053 posts since 20 Oct, 2007 from gonesville
I appreciate the decision to just wrap it up after the bridge, where typically the hook is belabored or tortured incessantly.
I really think 2 and a half minutes-ish is proper.
I really think 2 and a half minutes-ish is proper.
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- KVRAF
- 3080 posts since 17 Apr, 2005 from S.E. TN
Sounds good. Has a slight kraftwerkian reminiscense. I like the tight and tidy bass tone and balance.
- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 6322 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
Glad you enjoyed the vocals and synth work.wagtunes wrote: ↑Sun Jun 28, 2020 12:27 pm Ah, it's always nice to hear new stuff from you. I know I'm gonna like it before I even put it on. Still love that voice of yours. So cool sounding. In this one you have a little Lou Reed poking out.
Anyway, great mix as always. Love the synth work and the background voices. I could absolutely imagine this on the radio in the 80s.
Funny you should mention Lou Reed. I remember the first time I listened to a Lou Reed album and I heard his monotone, deadpan New York vocals and decided to stop listening because it would be too easy for me to start mimicking his delivery.
Thanks for your comments.
- KVRAF
- 3197 posts since 28 Aug, 2012 from Melbourne, Australia
Great track Frantz!
Got all the required elements done properly and some interesting additions.
The female vocals are a nice touch!
Well done!
Got all the required elements done properly and some interesting additions.
The female vocals are a nice touch!
Well done!
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- KVRian
- 1044 posts since 3 Jul, 2006
Great production and sound quality in general, I would expect. I just love your synth work.
I enjoy the track, but I'm still biased for your older "dark" voiced tracks!
Cheers!
I enjoy the track, but I'm still biased for your older "dark" voiced tracks!
Cheers!