KVR Audio

Spring Goose · Post by **Spring Goose** » Sun Jul 05, 2020 10:28 am

I've recently got an Avantone Mixcube, and now i can hear detail which i couldn't before. I'm still relatively new to mixing. This is my best/favourite "song"/track ATM.

https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/funky-deep-g-mixd

What can you tell me about my mix, or about the song/track? Moving on from last time i was told "all your "songs" are boring" and "i could train a 5 year old to make better song than you".

Spring Goose · Post by **Spring Goose** » Mon Jul 06, 2020 2:25 pm

Here's another. This one is a dirty sexy DISCO-HOUSE track.

https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/d-disco-mixd

Spring Goose · Post by **Spring Goose** » Wed Jul 08, 2020 8:33 am

Here's another. I don't know which genre i'd call it. I suppose i'll have to call it progressive house because i don't know where else it fits in.

https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/d ... 4bcivHc6FX

Say something about my song/s (track/s), if you'd like.

aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Fri Jul 17, 2020 4:19 am

Spring Goose,
Thank you for the reviews! Now listening to "Funky Deep G": the audio sounds a bit muffled. The vocals definitely add something. Instrumentally it is pretty repetitive. I guess it depends on your intentions. If you hope to have catchy melodies that stick in your brain, or that you want to hum along with, then I say it could use some work. If you want something to zone out on, like trance, then it succeeds. Now listening to "D# Disco": this has much better audio quality! I like the synths at around 1:05. The vocal clips definitely add to the song. The rising synth is nice. This is definitely danceable, and has much better melodies in my opinion. A bit repetitive; I would have made it shorter; though if you kept dancing on the dance floor, I'm OK with that. Overall, I like this much better than "Funky Deep G". Nice. Now listening to "Dream Vocal G": better audio quality than "Funky Deep G". The first 2 minutes, and other parts are rather repetitive for me. The vocals definitely add to the song. I like "D# Disco" by far the best of the 3.

Spring Goose · Post by **Spring Goose** » Fri Jul 17, 2020 7:52 am

Thanks Aaron Aardvark.

Spring Goose · Post by **Spring Goose** » Thu Jul 23, 2020 10:22 pm

Updated with a new mix and master.

highkoo · Post by **highkoo** » Thu Sep 03, 2020 12:29 am

Hey whats up OP!
I just read your mixing thread where some of the KvR elite went at you a couple months ago.

Nice to see you brush that bullshit off and move forward!
Some of those jerks were really in your face about 'groove'...

Spring Goose wrote: ↑Mon Jul 06, 2020 2:25 pm Here's another. This one is a dirty sexy DISCO-HOUSE track.

https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/d-disco-mixd

Totally groovy dude.
Keep at it.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Thu Sep 03, 2020 7:49 am

https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/d-disco-mixd
some elite jerks in here just want to help others improve.
and thats not going to happen if they dont voice their opinions
to others what needs improvement in their music.
that being said, i can hear improvement here, especially in composition
bringing new elements in and out, cutting the over-repetition
that spawns boredom. the mix sounded good as well.

good job, SG.

Spring Goose · Post by **Spring Goose** » Thu Sep 03, 2020 9:19 am

highkoo wrote: ↑Thu Sep 03, 2020 12:29 am Hey whats up OP!
I just read your mixing thread where some of the KvR elite went at you a couple months ago.
Nice to see you brush that bullshit off and move forward!
Some of those jerks were really in your face about 'groove'...

Spring Goose wrote: ↑Mon Jul 06, 2020 2:25 pm Here's another. This one is a dirty sexy DISCO-HOUSE track.

https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/d-disco-mixd
Totally groovy dude.
Keep at it.

Thanks man, glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for your support

Spring Goose · Post by **Spring Goose** » Thu Sep 03, 2020 9:20 am

layzer wrote: ↑Thu Sep 03, 2020 7:49 am https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/d-disco-mixd
some elite jerks in here just want to help others improve.
and thats not going to happen if they dont voice their opinions
to others what needs improvement in their music.
that being said, i can hear improvement here, especially in composition
bringing new elements in and out, cutting the over-repetition
that spawns boredom. the mix sounded good as well.

good job, SG.

Thanks Layzer.

Spring Goose · Post by **Spring Goose** » Thu Sep 03, 2020 12:12 pm

highkoo wrote: ↑Thu Sep 03, 2020 12:29 am Hey whats up OP!
I just read your mixing thread where some of the KvR elite went at you a couple months ago.
Nice to see you brush that bullshit off and move forward!
Some of those jerks were really in your face about 'groove'...

Spring Goose wrote: ↑Mon Jul 06, 2020 2:25 pm Here's another. This one is a dirty sexy DISCO-HOUSE track.

https://soundcloud.com/user-492255322/d-disco-mixd
Totally groovy dude.
Keep at it.

They could say which songs they've listened to and the comments/criticism per song.
Their generalisations for example "all your songs are not groovy" are not very helpful, i have to take it with a pinch of salt and GUESS which song/s they are talking about! (they haven't listened to all my songs). For example: i wouldn't expect that an ambient song is groovy!

Passing Bye · Post by **Passing Bye** » Thu Sep 03, 2020 1:17 pm

Funky Deep G is awesome.
D# Disco have ace bass, really nice urge, not digging melodic parts, but it's down to personal taste at this point.
Dream Vocal G could really work great on the floor.

Have a good one.

Elite Jerk

Passing Bye · Post by **Passing Bye** » Thu Sep 03, 2020 1:20 pm

layzer wrote: ↑Thu Sep 03, 2020 7:49 am some elite jerks in here just want to help others improve.
and thats not going to happen if they dont voice their opinions
to others what needs improvement in their music.
that being said, i can hear improvement here, especially in composition
bringing new elements in and out, cutting the over-repetition
that spawns boredom. the mix sounded good as well.

good job, SG.

+1

Spring Goose · Post by **Spring Goose** » Thu Sep 03, 2020 1:51 pm

Passing Bye wrote: ↑Thu Sep 03, 2020 1:17 pm Funky Deep G is awesome.
D# Disco have ace bass, really nice urge, not digging melodic parts, but it's down to personal taste at this point.
Dream Vocal G could really work great on the floor.

Have a good one.

Elite Jerk

Cheers for listening and feedback pal!

:D

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Thu Sep 03, 2020 3:39 pm

Spring Goose wrote: ↑Thu Sep 03, 2020 12:12 pm They could say which songs they've listened to and the comments/criticism per song.
Their generalisations for example "all your songs are not groovy" are not very helpful, i have to take it with a pinch of salt and GUESS which song/s they are talking about! (they haven't listened to all my songs). For example: i wouldn't expect that an ambient song is groovy!

i tend to prefer posting one song per post. it simplifies things
and i always know what song people are commenting about in
the post

also, i think people dont really like to give one member a whole
lot of time listening to multiple tracks listed in one post.
doing that comes across as kind of needy for attention, IMHO.
there is no one song per post rule OC, so carry on as you wish

How's my mix? 127bpm baggy groove 5.55 minutes.