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Val_Verrel
KVRist
88 posts since 1 Jul, 2018

Post Wed Jul 15, 2020 4:35 am

Hello all!

Been sometime since I shared anything on here but I'm back with a new track!

A bit different from my usually sounds but still would be great to hear some feedback.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xmCN6AC-nPs

Blessings!

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el-bo (formerly ebow)
KVRAF
16289 posts since 24 May, 2009 from A galaxy, far far away

Post Wed Jul 15, 2020 4:51 am

Different? Perhaps. It still has enough of your distinct style plastered over it to make it fit firmly within your sound.

Keep pushing. i think you've definitely got what it takes to 'make it' (Whatever that means, these days)

:tu:

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jethrobull
KVRAF
2098 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK

Post Wed Jul 15, 2020 10:57 am

Nice track. Really enjoyed. The only thing I will say is the low end (Kick/Bass) sounded a little distorted to me. Otherwise great work! :tu:
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Val_Verrel
KVRist
88 posts since 1 Jul, 2018

Post Thu Jul 16, 2020 6:06 am

Thanks El-bo it's reassuring to know this track works! Appreciate the support!

Hey Jethrobull! Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for listening.

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wagtunes
KVRAF
19668 posts since 8 Oct, 2014

Post Thu Jul 16, 2020 6:30 am

I agree, the kick is a little distorted but only in places. Perhaps a little multi band compression on the low end might fix that unless of course that's what you were going for. Otherwise, sounds fine.

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Bansaw
KVRian
1193 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Thu Jul 16, 2020 11:57 am

Great stuff, and good video too.
There is a lack of instrumentation in the higher octaves that would have given it more dimension.
Anyway, well done. :tu:

Val_Verrel
KVRist
88 posts since 1 Jul, 2018

Post Fri Jul 17, 2020 4:56 pm

Thanks for that wagtunes! I was going for a very heavy kick actually.

Hey Bensaw! Glad you enjoyed it! I definitely have gone back and forth about the instrumentation. Will have a better balance going forward. Thanks for the constructive critique.

Really appreciate the time taken to listen and give feedback guys,

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