Conspiracy X - (Progressive Deep House)
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 93 posts since 27 Apr, 2005
Hey everyone.
Here's a new track I have been working on. All feedback will be appreciated on how to improve it.
https://soundcloud.com/reminiscence/conspiracy-x
Thanks in advance!
Here's a new track I have been working on. All feedback will be appreciated on how to improve it.
https://soundcloud.com/reminiscence/conspiracy-x
Thanks in advance!
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
needs more kickbell
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
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- KVRAF
- 1611 posts since 23 Nov, 2018 from Birmingham, UK
Musically...
Nice atmospheric groove going on...all the parts weave together effectively.
for me it needs a LOT more material for something that long...nowhere near enough development, contrast and strong melodic hooks.
Production-wise:
That kick is quite dominant when it comes in...too much so for me.
Frequencies are a little unbalanced...
VERY heavy at the bottom end...somewhere centred around the 40Hz area I would say from listening?
More minor points:
Bit of a frequency 'hole' in the centre at times...400Hz upt 1 - 2 kHz (I'm guessing again) but it also has sudden spikes all over this area from time to time.
Top end - again a little uneven with significant spikes all over the place from time to time.
For me it's also overcompressed / limited in certain sections....dynamics too squashed.
And, yeah...that KICKBELL needs serious work!
Nice atmospheric groove going on...all the parts weave together effectively.
for me it needs a LOT more material for something that long...nowhere near enough development, contrast and strong melodic hooks.
Production-wise:
That kick is quite dominant when it comes in...too much so for me.
Frequencies are a little unbalanced...
VERY heavy at the bottom end...somewhere centred around the 40Hz area I would say from listening?
More minor points:
Bit of a frequency 'hole' in the centre at times...400Hz upt 1 - 2 kHz (I'm guessing again) but it also has sudden spikes all over this area from time to time.
Top end - again a little uneven with significant spikes all over the place from time to time.
For me it's also overcompressed / limited in certain sections....dynamics too squashed.
And, yeah...that KICKBELL needs serious work!
Mark Taylor, Chameleon Music - Professional composition and sound design for all media since 1994.
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
https://www.chameleonmusic.co.uk/
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 93 posts since 27 Apr, 2005
Thanks peeps. I'll give another go.