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smd12 · Post by **smd12** » Tue Mar 09, 2021 9:30 am

Here is a new electro rock track 128 bpm

Here is the updated version:

https://soundcloud.com/mike_twelve/clown-shoes

https://soundcloud.com/mike_twelve/mike ... lown-shoes

Enjoy

ChameleonMusic · Post by **ChameleonMusic** » Tue Mar 09, 2021 2:12 pm

Good listen...some interesting little musical ideas in there that all fit together pretty well.

Mix-wise...felt that the bass just 'got in the way' of everything else to some extent at times....maybe needed narrowing + a bit of EQ tweaking?

frank1985 · Post by **frank1985** » Tue Mar 09, 2021 5:09 pm

I can't judge the mix as i'm listening on earbuds. But I liked all the musical ideas presented throughout the track. I reckon it would be better though for you to condense those down to around 4 minutes.

smd12 · Post by **smd12** » Tue Mar 09, 2021 7:16 pm

ChameleonMusic wrote: ↑Tue Mar 09, 2021 2:12 pm Good listen...some interesting little musical ideas in there that all fit together pretty well.

Mix-wise...felt that the bass just 'got in the way' of everything else to some extent at times....maybe needed narrowing + a bit of EQ tweaking?

Thanks for listening and the review.

Bass is a tad bit much on this one

smd12 · Post by **smd12** » Tue Mar 09, 2021 7:17 pm

frank1985 wrote: ↑Tue Mar 09, 2021 5:09 pm I can't judge the mix as i'm listening on earbuds. But I liked all the musical ideas presented throughout the track. I reckon it would be better though for you to condense those down to around 4 minutes.

Thanks for listening and the review

Halonmusic · Post by **Halonmusic** » Tue Mar 09, 2021 8:22 pm

yes the bass is a bit too much. maybe lower the volume a bit and cut everything below 50-70 hz or so? nonetheless i really enjoyed the track. well done!

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Wed Mar 10, 2021 2:55 am

good listen, the bass can use some sub 60hz highpass filtering to
cut boomyness. the volumes at around 60hz are actually ok imo.
still enjoyed the track as-is. well done

smd12 · Post by **smd12** » Wed Mar 10, 2021 11:46 am

Halonmusic wrote: ↑Tue Mar 09, 2021 8:22 pm yes the bass is a bit too much. maybe lower the volume a bit and cut everything below 50-70 hz or so? nonetheless i really enjoyed the track. well done!

Thanks for listening and the review

smd12 · Post by **smd12** » Wed Mar 10, 2021 11:47 am

layzer wrote: ↑Wed Mar 10, 2021 2:55 am good listen, the bass can use some sub 60hz highpass filtering to
cut boomyness. the volumes at around 60hz are actually ok imo.
still enjoyed the track as-is. well done

Thanks for listening and the review

smd12 · Post by **smd12** » Wed Mar 10, 2021 6:24 pm

Updated Bass version

https://soundcloud.com/mike_twelve/clown-shoes

Electro Rock Track - *New and Improved With Lemon Scent and Less Bass*

Electro Rock Track - New and Improved With Lemon Scent and Less Bass