Stay positive (Electronic/Industrial)

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KVRer
20 posts since 16 Sep, 2007 from Desktop

Post Wed May 12, 2021 4:17 am

Hey guys,

It's so hard getting listeners and feedback these days despite the internet provide us with all these places to post our songs. So here's a deal, if you give constructive negative feedback on this song and would like my opinion on a piece of yours then I promise I'll do that, just leave your feedback here with an URL to your song.

What would you do different:
https://youtu.be/zBuE_7XT-GE

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KVRer
17 posts since 9 May, 2021

Post Wed May 12, 2021 6:48 am

I like it. Nice grooves. The only part that's odd to me is at 2:40. It's been a while since I took music theory, but there's something going on there with those two chords that's "musically unsettling" to me. Other than that I really enjoyed it.

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KVRian
649 posts since 3 Jul, 2017

Post Wed May 12, 2021 8:40 am

firstly, f**k off facebook. secondly, nice attempt with this kind of music style. the master is a bit on the sharp side, maybe intended.

KVRer

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20 posts since 16 Sep, 2007 from Desktop

Post Thu May 13, 2021 1:34 am

mardem1976 wrote:
Wed May 12, 2021 6:48 am
The only part that's odd to me is at 2:40
Thanks for your feedback. I did mean to make it sound chaotic or unsettling as you call it to represent the craziness of life, I should have followed it up with more positive vibes though. Anyway stay positive :hihi:

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