Stay positive (Electronic/Industrial)
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 30 posts since 16 Sep, 2007 from Desktop
Hey guys,
It's so hard getting listeners and feedback these days despite the internet provide us with all these places to post our songs. So here's a deal, if you give constructive negative feedback on this song and would like my opinion on a piece of yours then I promise I'll do that, just leave your feedback here with an URL to your song.
What would you do different:
https://youtu.be/zBuE_7XT-GE
Follow me on FB for more of this music
https://www.facebook.com/Shockbroker
It's so hard getting listeners and feedback these days despite the internet provide us with all these places to post our songs. So here's a deal, if you give constructive negative feedback on this song and would like my opinion on a piece of yours then I promise I'll do that, just leave your feedback here with an URL to your song.
What would you do different:
https://youtu.be/zBuE_7XT-GE
Follow me on FB for more of this music
https://www.facebook.com/Shockbroker
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- KVRer
- 21 posts since 9 May, 2021
I like it. Nice grooves. The only part that's odd to me is at 2:40. It's been a while since I took music theory, but there's something going on there with those two chords that's "musically unsettling" to me. Other than that I really enjoyed it.
- Banned
- 849 posts since 3 Jul, 2017
firstly, f**k off facebook. secondly, nice attempt with this kind of music style. the master is a bit on the sharp side, maybe intended.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 30 posts since 16 Sep, 2007 from Desktop
Thanks for your feedback. I did mean to make it sound chaotic or unsettling as you call it to represent the craziness of life, I should have followed it up with more positive vibes though. Anyway stay positive