Stay positive (Electronic/Industrial)

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Hey guys,

It's so hard getting listeners and feedback these days despite the internet provide us with all these places to post our songs. So here's a deal, if you give constructive negative feedback on this song and would like my opinion on a piece of yours then I promise I'll do that, just leave your feedback here with an URL to your song.

What would you do different:
https://youtu.be/zBuE_7XT-GE

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I like it. Nice grooves. The only part that's odd to me is at 2:40. It's been a while since I took music theory, but there's something going on there with those two chords that's "musically unsettling" to me. Other than that I really enjoyed it.

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firstly, f**k off facebook. secondly, nice attempt with this kind of music style. the master is a bit on the sharp side, maybe intended.

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mardem1976 wrote: Wed May 12, 2021 2:48 pm The only part that's odd to me is at 2:40
Thanks for your feedback. I did mean to make it sound chaotic or unsettling as you call it to represent the craziness of life, I should have followed it up with more positive vibes though. Anyway stay positive :hihi:

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