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r1_000 · Post by **r1_000** » Wed Aug 04, 2021 6:54 am

I produced this track with my friend Doobie Dangerfield, who wrote the score. Please feel free to leave a comment. Thanks for listening.
RMDX

https://soundcloud.com/rmdx/deep-down

eassae · Post by **eassae** » Thu Aug 05, 2021 7:47 pm

Nice. The percussion is overwhelming the other elements at times to me, but over all enjoyable track.

r1_000 · Post by **r1_000** » Wed Aug 11, 2021 5:14 am

Thanks for the feedback eassae it's much appreciated. I think the whole mix is out of balance.

ChameleonMusic · Post by **ChameleonMusic** » Wed Aug 11, 2021 10:22 am

Was gonna have a listen...but it seems to have disappeared?

r1_000 · Post by **r1_000** » Wed Aug 11, 2021 11:28 am

Thanks for taking the time ChameleonMusic even though I took it down. I thought the mix was a bit off and I'm re doing it. Also waiting for a guitar part to mix in

ChameleonMusic · Post by **ChameleonMusic** » Wed Aug 11, 2021 3:01 pm

r1_000 wrote: ↑Wed Aug 11, 2021 11:28 am Thanks for taking the time ChameleonMusic even though I took it down. I thought the mix was a bit off and I'm re doing it. Also waiting for a guitar part to mix in

Fair enough!

Maybe change the title of the topic to 'deleted post' or something, so people know?

r1_000 · Post by **r1_000** » Wed Aug 11, 2021 5:06 pm

I've put track back on to SoundCloud with it remixed.

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Wed Aug 11, 2021 7:59 pm

Some nice parts to it; good solid sound choices. Enjoyable

Arrangement could have been a touch better.

r1_000 · Post by **r1_000** » Wed Aug 11, 2021 11:17 pm

Bansaw wrote: ↑Wed Aug 11, 2021 7:59 pm Some nice parts to it; good solid sound choices. Enjoyable
Arrangement could have been a touch better.

Thank you for your comments. I'm curious about what you don't like about the arrangement.
Feel free to elaborate further or not. Just listening and leaving a comment means a lot. Thanks again.

Bansaw · Post by **Bansaw** » Thu Aug 12, 2021 8:58 pm

r1_000 wrote: ↑Wed Aug 11, 2021 11:17 pm
Bansaw wrote: ↑Wed Aug 11, 2021 7:59 pm Some nice parts to it; good solid sound choices. Enjoyable
Arrangement could have been a touch better.
Thank you for your comments. I'm curious about what you don't like about the arrangement.
Feel free to elaborate further or not. Just listening and leaving a comment means a lot. Thanks again.

Inserting a few bars of, for example:
- different percussion elements (drop the kick out, or drop the snare out)
- a bridge with a different chord progression
- a drop out with just pads
- a filter (HP or LP) modulation
- add an element, fade another element out
- make one element the obvious focus
etc.

r1_000 · Post by **r1_000** » Fri Aug 13, 2021 4:07 am

Bansaw wrote: ↑Thu Aug 12, 2021 8:58 pm
r1_000 wrote: ↑Wed Aug 11, 2021 11:17 pm
Bansaw wrote: ↑Wed Aug 11, 2021 7:59 pm Some nice parts to it; good solid sound choices. Enjoyable
Arrangement could have been a touch better.
Thank you for your comments. I'm curious about what you don't like about the arrangement.
Feel free to elaborate further or not. Just listening and leaving a comment means a lot. Thanks again.
Inserting a few bars of, for example:
- different percussion elements (drop the kick out, or drop the snare out)
- a bridge with a different chord progression
- a drop out with just pads
- a filter (HP or LP) modulation
- add an element, fade another element out
- make one element the obvious focus
etc.

Thank you for taking the time to offer suggestions. I'll offer them to the other co-writer of the track next time we work on it.

Deep Down