Spring Goose - Bright Erle (progressive house)

[Spring Goose]

https://soundcloud.com/springgoose/spri ... right-erle

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[3lu5iv3]

not a bad tune but 9 minutes is quite a long time even if u have a lot of variation.
it gets boring real quick. nice cover art BTW.

[Spring Goose]

not a bad tune but 9 minutes is quite a long time even if u have a lot of variation.
it gets boring real quick. nice cover art BTW.

Thanks, it was Jasinski from OSC competition who gave me the picture. Ok i'll bare that in mind in future that it could be too long for people listening. It's not too long for me, it puts me in like a trance and the time just flies by! Thanks for replying.

[Spring Goose]

There's 2minute30 of intro, then the drop. I'm just thinking what/where i could take out to make it shorter.

[Bansaw]

The quirky out-of-time percussion is interesting for a few bars, but tiring after that.

[Spring Goose]

The quirky out-of-time percussion is interesting for a few bars, but tiring after that.

but you don't like clubby dance music. ? --

Clubby dance music is by its very nature repetitive.

[Spring Goose]

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[Bansaw]

The quirky out-of-time percussion is interesting for a few bars, but tiring after that.

but you don't like clubby dance music. ? it's like me reviewing yoiu if i don't like nostalgic eighties music for example i could a say "it's ok but nothing i never heard 25 YEARS AGO". for example TickTock i was bored to death in about 10 seconds it sounds like a very boring clock just ticking.

Clubby dance music is by its very nature repetitive.

I'm OK with club music, but you have a stuttering kick

[Spring Goose]

The quirky out-of-time percussion is interesting for a few bars, but tiring after that.

but you don't like clubby dance music. ? it's like me reviewing yoiu if i don't like nostalgic eighties music for example i could a say "it's ok but nothing i never heard 25 YEARS AGO". for example TickTock i was bored to death in about 10 seconds it sounds like a very boring clock just ticking.

Clubby dance music is by its very nature repetitive.

you have a stuttering kick

My song has a syncopated rhythm, and?

[Spring Goose]

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When did you become Bansaw Crown? Was it the day you joined the royal family?

[Spring Goose]

Just for accuracy's sake it isn't "out of time" it's a normal syncopated rhythm.

[elxsound]

I have to agree with the earlier response that 2nd kick, falling right between the 2-e (1 e + a 2 e + a) just makes it sound rushed.

If you like, you like it and that's that. But to most listeners, it's jarring and takes away focus.

[Spring Goose]

I have to agree with the earlier response that 2nd kick, falling right between the 2-e (1 e + a 2 e + a) just makes it sound rushed.

If you like, you like it and that's that. But to most listeners, it's jarring and takes away focus.

Ok thanks, well you weren't rude about it. & i know for a fact that Bansaw doesn't like clubby dance music, and in the past Bansaw told me that i'm not welcome to post my songs in Music Cafe like he's the mafia boss of Music Cafe.

[sjm]

I can only agree with the previous posters. It's far too long, and the kick sounds off with the timing you have there. The kick's timing makes the track sound disjointed; it doesn't scream "clubby dance track". If that's what you are going for, then make the rhythm simple and danceable.

[Spring Goose]

It is danceable i think.

You think a do do - do beat isn't danceable?

& it ain't just the drum what is danceable, it's the bass and the whole thing.