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DschohnE
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5 posts since 5 Jan, 2022

Post Wed Jan 05, 2022 1:40 pm

Update: After your tips i gave a new try to mix the tracks with more width and depth and get some variations into it.

Molody is now like a shorter Radio Edit: https://soundcloud.com/dschohne/molody- ... al_sharing


Boinky Sausage is a complete new Version with new sections: https://soundcloud.com/dschohne/boinky- ... al_sharing

I would love to hear what you think!


The old Versions are still available here:
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2 New Tracks released. Not sure if mix/mastering quality is ok. Feedback is very welcome!

https://soundcloud.com/dschohne
Last edited by DschohnE on Tue Jan 18, 2022 2:50 am, edited 2 times in total.

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eassae
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729 posts since 18 May, 2021

Post Wed Jan 05, 2022 1:55 pm

They both sound pretty good to me. Boinky Sausage was repetitive, Molody was more interesting. I think both tracks could use a little more ear candy and variation.
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DschohnE
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Post Thu Jan 06, 2022 7:19 am

Hey eassae, thank you! I will try to bring more variation into my tracks. I often get stuck in a loop and find it hard to break out of it.

vajrakilla
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8 posts since 21 Dec, 2021

Post Sat Jan 15, 2022 2:06 pm

I love how evolving 'melody' is. The way the lead and the pads interact is so well done. That acid arp fits into the vibe real nice too. For me, I would like to hear the kick a little more, kinda like how it sounds in 'Boinky Sausage'. It seems that 'Melody' has an overall thickness that 'Boinky' doesn't have. I do like em tho!

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Bansaw
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1719 posts since 19 Aug, 2008

Post Sat Jan 15, 2022 4:45 pm

I liked some of the sound choices. Mixing - depth and width could be better. A touch more variation too.
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DschohnE
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Post Sun Jan 16, 2022 2:24 pm

Thanks for your inputs!

DschohnE
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Post Tue Jan 18, 2022 2:52 am

Update in original Post :wink:

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