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The dark in which I hide

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I4CuXo8_E4E

The phone vibrates
on the table
its silent mode
does not prevent the incomng call

I see the screen
that lights up
in the dark
in which I hide

I know it`s him him hi
but I I I
I am no longer me

I am a parenthesis
of myself
a space
between before and now
empty and alien
to cause and effect

The phone vibrates
on thte table
its silent mode
does not prevent the incoming call

but I am far
eventhough I am close
out of reach of his voice
and his kisses

in my nest of dreaming
at the mercy of a gentle wind

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Its unique, I'll give you that.
I watched pretty much all of it, and thats saying something because my attention span is not huge.
But it kept my attention in a strange kind of way.

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I agree with Bansaw. That is some weird stuff. LOL. FWIW, it got me smiling. One thing I can say, it's unique and not boring. I think for most people this would be an acquired taste. I don't even know what genre this would fit into. Can honestly say I've never heard anything like it.

Good job!

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Bansaw wrote: Sat Jan 22, 2022 1:51 am Its unique, I'll give you that.
I watched pretty much all of it, and thats saying something because my attention span is not huge.
But it kept my attention in a strange kind of way.
Hi @Bansaw

Thank you so much, Mora is very happy, she thinks that retaining attention is a success!!!
Stay well
Marcus

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wagtunes wrote: Sat Jan 22, 2022 3:42 am I agree with Bansaw. That is some weird stuff. LOL. FWIW, it got me smiling. One thing I can say, it's unique and not boring. I think for most people this would be an acquired taste. I don't even know what genre this would fit into. Can honestly say I've never heard anything like it.

Good job!
Thank you very much @wagtune
Yes, Moa is unique.she can transform simple, everyday topics into a strange experience as she has done in this song and video.
Stay well
Mora

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Another nice one. I really dig the vibe. Another cool video as well.
eassae.com
“I do nothing professionally, I do everything for fun.”—Prince, Under the Cherry Moon

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eassae wrote: Sat Jan 22, 2022 4:27 pm Another nice one. I really dig the vibe. Another cool video as well.
Thank you very much, muchas gracias.
Mora

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Onacarom Music wrote: Sat Jan 22, 2022 7:28 pm
eassae wrote: Sat Jan 22, 2022 4:27 pm Another nice one. I really dig the vibe. Another cool video as well.
Thank you very much, muchas gracias.
Mora
Seems like you're on a roll with these. Is there going to be an album?
eassae.com
“I do nothing professionally, I do everything for fun.”—Prince, Under the Cherry Moon

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eassae wrote: Sat Jan 22, 2022 9:13 pm
Onacarom Music wrote: Sat Jan 22, 2022 7:28 pm
eassae wrote: Sat Jan 22, 2022 4:27 pm Another nice one. I really dig the vibe. Another cool video as well.
Thank you very much, muchas gracias.
Mora
Seems like you're on a roll with these. Is there going to be an album?
Hola @eassae
We have to choose wisely the songs that can be part of an album!!
Stay well there.

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