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https://archive.org/download/irrational ... 0final.mp3

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Verse 1:
I cook tasty little things to eat.

I don't breathe.

A pot full of beans is what I really need.

Lentil soup.
Add some meat and throw in a little fruit.

Philosophy.

Always dripping lemon juice on the goose.
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Chorus 1:
Turn round, reading down.
One spoon to the fuckin moon.

A treat, faster feet.
Jump the fence. I'm past tense.
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Verse 2:
Technical Corn Dogs aren't my forte.
I prefer to make things my way.

Read, eat, search, fly.
Cook, steam, boil, and cry.

Rational Choice Theory
Max Utility
Skydiving for the truth
Problems for the youth

I learned my cooking in the streets.
While making sumptuous beats.
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Chorus 2:
Turn round, reading down.
One spoon to the fuckin moon.

A treat, faster feet.
Jump the fence. I'm past tense.
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Verse 3:
This is the time. To make it good.
This is the time. To make it right.
This is the time. You really should.
Do not pass up this up; it's your birthright.

They want fries, you want lime.
They want fruit, you want prime.
They want carbs, you want fat.
You're going to need a diplomat.

I cook tasty little things to eat.
I don't breathe.
A pot full of beans is what I really need.

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Nice, very catchy.

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For a silly song that was some serious fun. Before I take another bowl and grab a snack, Ill say noice work. Catchy and engaging.
Reverbnation
see ya 'round...

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The Noodlist wrote: Thu Apr 21, 2022 9:40 pm Nice, very catchy.
Thanks :)
Morgaxx wrote: Fri Apr 22, 2022 2:00 am For a silly song that was some serious fun. Before I take another bowl and grab a snack, Ill say noice work. Catchy and engaging.
Glad you enjoyed.

If anyone's interested, here's a different mix without the synth or guitar embellishments.
https://archive.org/download/irrational ... 0vocal.mp3

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Very enjoyable song.
I am getting hungry right about now.
I am truly enjoying your song.
Rene

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Rene Asologuitar wrote: Fri Apr 22, 2022 7:50 pm Very enjoyable song.
I am getting hungry right about now.
I am truly enjoying your song.
Rene
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the comment. :)

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I listened to both of 'em. I prefer the full arrangement in the first post. It's an interesting song and I liked the structure. I could hear elements of the RHCPs, earlier Zappa, and even some early '70s flower-power style cues. I loved the dynamic contrast between the verses and the chorus.

Good work :)

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A beautiful acoustic guitar song. Light and easy - nice to listen to.
I find the different voices and the guitar accompaniment very
striking and successful. But the tension and melody also fit well
and create a great atmosphere.

Overall, I would like the mix to be a little clearer and more
transparent.

All in all: Great song, I enjoyed it! :tu:
free mp3s + info: andy-enroe.de songs + weird stuff: enroe.de

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