A Story Unfolds - Original Production
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 37 posts since 13 Apr, 2022 from Switzerland
Hello everybody
I've just finished my new pretty calm orchestral project
This one called A Story Unfolds and gave me 2 week to finish it
https://soundcloud.com/juzmusic/a-story-unfolds
Will be awesome to have opinions about it
Greetings
Ju'z Music
I've just finished my new pretty calm orchestral project
This one called A Story Unfolds and gave me 2 week to finish it
https://soundcloud.com/juzmusic/a-story-unfolds
Will be awesome to have opinions about it
Greetings
Ju'z Music
Ju'z Music
https://soundcloud.com/juzmusic
https://soundcloud.com/juzmusic
- KVRAF
- 1988 posts since 19 Aug, 2008
I think you blended the instruments very well: the brass, strings and winds, and made the chordal structure very interesting.
However, the "story" didn't unfold. I was waiting for it to take me somewhere and tell a story, but it took me around in a circle.
I feel a "call and response" - a conversation - was missing. A few bars of percussion... some more variety. I was waiting to be nicely surprised by something, waiting to be told a story, but was left a little frustrated. Sorry. There's a lot to like about it, but the arrangement and storytelling need to be enhanced imho.
However, the "story" didn't unfold. I was waiting for it to take me somewhere and tell a story, but it took me around in a circle.
I feel a "call and response" - a conversation - was missing. A few bars of percussion... some more variety. I was waiting to be nicely surprised by something, waiting to be told a story, but was left a little frustrated. Sorry. There's a lot to like about it, but the arrangement and storytelling need to be enhanced imho.
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- KVRian
- 980 posts since 2 Apr, 2022
Beautiful intro, Looks like I am in a play and the curtain just open up, and delivers a magnificent scene of beauty. I agree with Bansaw, you need to lead us somewhere.
The recording and the composition is very nicely done and the music is truly enjoyable, just a little enhancement.
Great work!!!
Rene
The recording and the composition is very nicely done and the music is truly enjoyable, just a little enhancement.
Great work!!!
Rene
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 37 posts since 13 Apr, 2022 from Switzerland
Thank you for your honest review I think title track is not really representative of the music
Ju'z Music
https://soundcloud.com/juzmusic
https://soundcloud.com/juzmusic
- KVRist
- 471 posts since 20 Nov, 2021
Lovely sounding track. It feels like an introduction rather than a whole story, but it could stand on its own as that.