copper lake - roses and love [rough draft 3]

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kingozrecords
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1203 posts since 7 Apr, 2019 from Canada

Post Fri May 27, 2022 8:52 pm

https://youtu.be/Hbv_InpTuFY

A bit better than the first draft.
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Post Sat May 28, 2022 9:05 am

This is seriously catchy - both the guitar riff and the vocal melody stick in the memory...definitely worth completing.

Vocals - yes, they need a bit of refining maybe? The melody is very good, but it all just needs a bit of practice to get it spot on in terms of tuning and timing...been there myself and it takes a while sometimes.

I would also love for the whole piece to 'go somewhere new' - a lift into a chorus / contrasting section? Just a new riff + different vocal line?
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Post Sat May 28, 2022 4:09 pm

ChameleonMusic wrote: Sat May 28, 2022 9:05 am This is seriously catchy - both the guitar riff and the vocal melody stick in the memory...definitely worth completing.

Vocals - yes, they need a bit of refining maybe? The melody is very good, but it all just needs a bit of practice to get it spot on in terms of tuning and timing...been there myself and it takes a while sometimes.

I would also love for the whole piece to 'go somewhere new' - a lift into a chorus / contrasting section? Just a new riff + different vocal line?
Yes, I totally agree; I was reminded of Nirvana. I'll add more; it's a matter of a guitar that sounds grungy enough and does not have sharp, piercing highs.

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