into the club - out of the club [electronic]

[tomtom1]

someone enters the club through the front door - after some serious trouble he leaves through the backdoor - tbh, i've never been in a club...

like always if someone recognize a really "disruptive" element - something too loud, harsh (the bell sound is really tricky...) - kick too loud etc. don't hold back, write it down

have a nice day!

https://soundcloud.com/treib-haus-81860 ... f-the-club

[ATS]

starts off pretty suddenly, might be cool to make an intro. I can see that bell being really tricky for sure. I really liked the change up at one minute. I would rework that around 1:50, it just gets too crowded with sounds there and doesn't sound quite right. Maybe if you hard pan a thing or two might help or just take out something all together. Ending was cool. This needs and intro and i would seriously make it a little longer to make each part a little less abrupt.

[margaret0547]

I liked this one, pleasant sound in the intro and ending.

[markkuja]

Nice instrumental music. I liked the composition and joyful mood. Good structure and sounds.

[Rene Asologuitar]

Hi tomtom1,
I love all the sounds introduced, especially on 0:56.
The mix sounds balance to me, well done.
Rene

[Jesse Gorter]

nice use of the legacy cell guitar, that's also on cherry blossom girl by air.
Or, maybe I'm wrong?

I like the bass from 1 min

to me it feels like a great canvas, but still waiting for a kick ass synth solo on top of it? but that's my taste

[tomtom1]

nice use of the legacy cell guitar, that's also on cherry blossom girl by air.
Or, maybe I'm wrong?

I like the bass from 1 min

to me it feels like a great canvas, but still waiting for a kick ass synth solo on top of it? but that's my taste

Tbh i didn't know that song of Air. But i see the similarities. I think you mean the ARP-sound in the beginning? - it is the Synapse Obession as a Rack extension. The rest is standard Reason-synths from Version 11 Suite.

about the missing melody. I understand what you mean. but i tried to get away from melodies a little bit. I've also tried to concentrate more on the technical things - that's why my tracks are all pretty short at the moment.

Thx for listening!

[tomtom1]

Hi tomtom1,
I love all the sounds introduced, especially on 0:56.
The mix sounds balance to me, well done.
Rene

Nice instrumental music. I liked the composition and joyful mood. Good structure and sounds.

Thanks for listening! Glad you liked it.

[tomtom1]

starts off pretty suddenly, might be cool to make an intro. I can see that bell being really tricky for sure. I really liked the change up at one minute. I would rework that around 1:50, it just gets too crowded with sounds there and doesn't sound quite right. Maybe if you hard pan a thing or two might help or just take out something all together. Ending was cool. This needs and intro and i would seriously make it a little longer to make each part a little less abrupt.

Thx for listening. I tried to focus on the more technical things. That is why it is relative short.
You are right about that part - there is going on a lot. The idea was to end it with a more noise-like bang. But i am not 100% happy with it. (I am always afraid of hard panning - it is true!! )

[seismic1]

(I am always afraid of hard panning - it is true!! )

Interesting comment. I think I am the same. I rarely pan a sound more that 60% from the centre.

I tried it (100%) once, and it wasn't a success, so now use panning more "conservatively".

[tomtom1]

(I am always afraid of hard panning - it is true!! )

Interesting comment. I think I am the same. I rarely pan a sound more that 60% from the centre.

I tried it (100%) once, and it wasn't a success, so now use panning more "conservatively".

ha... 60%... I get abdominal pain when it exceeds 50% ...