KVR Audio

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Fri Sep 30, 2022 4:44 am

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songIn ... D=14497659

I think I worked on this enough for now. Would love some feedback, good or bad. Will go back and fix whatever needs to be fixed.

Thanks!

RTFX · Post by **RTFX** » Fri Sep 30, 2022 5:31 am

Funny track with this uh oh sample as the red thread. Could use a bit more lowend to beef it up little.
Hats off to the rest of the mix!

morelia · Post by **morelia** » Fri Sep 30, 2022 11:25 am

Well you know how I feel about the vocal samples. But in this instance, if you took them away it would remove some of the momentum of the song. I like how it is a fairly sparse arrangement and still sounds full and interesting.

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Sat Oct 01, 2022 7:37 pm

thanks for the comments.

Genetic_Junk · Post by **Genetic_Junk** » Sat Oct 01, 2022 10:53 pm

Agreed, very clear mix. The music is uplifting and upbeat. I like the vocal melody but might prefer it interspersed with quicker notes or trills to change the pace a bit.

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Mon Oct 03, 2022 2:03 am

Genetic_Junk wrote: ↑Sat Oct 01, 2022 10:53 pm Agreed, very clear mix. The music is uplifting and upbeat. I like the vocal melody but might prefer it interspersed with quicker notes or trills to change the pace a bit.

Thanks so much for the good ideas!

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Tue Oct 04, 2022 9:54 am

would love some more feedback, will be sure to offer what I can for you as well.

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Wed Oct 05, 2022 9:57 pm

ATS wrote: ↑Tue Oct 04, 2022 9:54 am would love some more feedback, will be sure to offer what I can for you as well.

mainly looking for ways to improve but any sort of feedback is more than welcome.

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Wed Oct 05, 2022 10:08 pm

I noted the comment about adding more low end to beef up the sound and initially thought that might be a good idea, but now I'm not so sure. It might "darken" the overall sound to the point where you lose the upbeat, cheerful nature of the track. Everything else about the mix is fine. Lots of clarity and lightness.

Good work

RonyGN · Post by **RonyGN** » Thu Oct 06, 2022 8:37 am

Reminds me of the video games I was playing on my SNES system at the mid of the 90's. And that's a good thing.

margaret0547 · Post by **margaret0547** » Thu Oct 06, 2022 2:45 pm

Very good. I also liked the next track, 'Advance'.

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Sat Oct 08, 2022 2:42 am

Thanks for the kind comments.

enroe · Post by **enroe** » Sun Oct 09, 2022 8:43 am

"Uh oh!" is already an expressive title that shifts the pendulum strongly
towards emotion. The title itself exudes a happy, cheerful feel to start
the day with. Nice little synth melodies build up. At 1:38 there is even
a small break. After that it goes on as usual ... it flows very nicely.

Personally, I would somehow incorporate a break and create a contrast.
The exuberantly beautiful feeling would suddenly be disturbed. But that's
just a suggestion.

All in all: nice song fragment. But I would still "complete" it.

tomtom1 · Post by **tomtom1** » Sun Oct 09, 2022 10:05 am

overall this is good track. on my monitors the uh-oh lead is just slighty too upfront. personally i would have wished that the melodies were a bit more "embedded". unfortunately, I can't tell you how it works technically. (I suspect 1 db less or more on different tracks). but overall a good piece and a solid, good mix.

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Mon Oct 10, 2022 12:21 am

enroe wrote: ↑Sun Oct 09, 2022 8:43 am "Uh oh!" is already an expressive title that shifts the pendulum strongly
towards emotion. The title itself exudes a happy, cheerful feel to start
the day with. Nice little synth melodies build up. At 1:38 there is even
a small break. After that it goes on as usual ... it flows very nicely.

Personally, I would somehow incorporate a break and create a contrast.
The exuberantly beautiful feeling would suddenly be disturbed. But that's
just a suggestion.

All in all: nice song fragment. But I would still "complete" it.

I agree, when I listen to it I feel like I have some more work to do on it.

Uh Oh! By Alex Cooper (electronic)