Stench

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KVRian
1408 posts since 13 Oct, 2003 from Prague, Czech Republic

Post Tue Jul 15, 2008 1:16 am

A quickly done song: Stench

The deadline for it was today so I couldn't finish the chorus vocals. I just replaced them with a synth part. My subwoofer has also broken down, so I've no idea if this song is bassheavy or anti-bassheavy...

Because of the missing vocals in the chorus, you can think of this song as a karaoke chorus song and join in the song in the chorus part. Just scream the lyrics on top of your lungs in the rhythm of the song :)

Here are the vocals:
Laying back on my bed.
Thinking about you.

How bad you smell.
Can't forget it about you.

Can't get no sleep now.
Your stench is intense.

You want to have some fun?
No, it can't be done.

---

I will rather wank
than dip it in you.

You're not welcome here.
Find out someone new.

I can't take no more
getting laid each time.

I must hold my breath
passing out all night.

Smell keeps getting worse,
as the days go by.

I must keep myself,
wide awake through night.

Pack your panties and
stay out of my life.

You should try yourself,
staying week outside.

---

(the stench is intense)

Words can't describe
that rotting smell.

I fear I'll get infected
by you somehow.

I regret the day I met you.
It was a mistake.

I can promise you now
you'll never see me again.

---

(chorus again)

---

Laying back on my bed.
Thinking about you.

But now that you're dead.
You don't smell so bad.

ProductBE
Banned
89 posts since 30 Jun, 2008 from Knowsley/Liverpool

Post Tue Jul 15, 2008 8:27 pm

Like the bass and beat, but you need to pop those vocals, to muted and mixed in
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sinnatagg
KVRist
43 posts since 26 Feb, 2007 from Oslo, Norway

Post Fri Jul 25, 2008 4:54 am

Liked the chorus part. Is that vocoded vocals or a synth. The track would benefit from some more development of the arrangement though, even if it's just a quick thing.


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