Deep House

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KVRist
52 posts since 16 Nov, 2011

Post Thu Mar 08, 2012 12:48 pm

My attempt to make cool deep house tune. This is what I am working on right now.
Also, comment, criticize, etc, I hope it will be helpful, because I am somehow
stuck with no idea what to do next in this track.

http://soundcloud.com/tune-in-1/deephouse

http://k004.kiwi6.com/hotlink/0nokg3q55b/deephouse.mp3

wachimol
KVRist
111 posts since 15 Jan, 2012

Post Thu Mar 08, 2012 3:14 pm

this doesn't strike me as too much of house, but there's a lot you can do with this. Firstly I would recommend adding a stronger kick drum. You can make those synth stab things you have vary melodically while sweeping them with a filter. Also, to me this track is just dying for an electric piano solo.

There's so much room improvement you can do. Go nuts!

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KVRAF
3056 posts since 13 Jul, 2003 from outer rim

Post Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:17 pm

others may disagree, but I thought the instruments could come up compared to the beats. Like the kind of groove/movement it had.

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