Will You Find (pop/ballad/something)

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Kraku
KVRian
1408 posts since 13 Oct, 2003 from Prague, Czech Republic

Post Tue Apr 15, 2014 10:34 am

Here's a new one, fresh out of the oven:

http://www.krakulandia.info/Music/mmc/k ... 20Find.mp3

This time I managed to catch a singer and took advantage of her :-P

All feedback is welcome.


Gear used:

Eurorack modular (the bass)
Logic Pro
M-Tron Pro
Glue
Elephant
A.N.A.
EchoBoy

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folderol
KVRAF
4781 posts since 5 Aug, 2006 from UK - Here!

Re: Will You Find (pop/ballad/something)

Post Wed Apr 16, 2014 12:53 pm

I quite enjoyed this, but thought your singer was having a hard time catching some of the notes, especially the lower ones. Was she working oustide her most comfortable range? The melody does rather leap about which makes it harder for her of course.
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was)

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Frantz
KVRAF
5015 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Re: Will You Find (pop/ballad/something)

Post Wed Apr 16, 2014 10:21 pm

Kraku wrote: This time I managed to catch a singer and took advantage of her :-P
:o Is she locked in your basement? Should I call the police?

She has a pleasant voice. Folderol is right she is having trouble hitting the low notes which means the key is too low for her.

The song is good. However, it would be better if the arrangement wasn't so bland. Other than the brief opening flourish, the arrangement is just bass and pads. It sounds like No Frills Pop.

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Kraku
KVRian
1408 posts since 13 Oct, 2003 from Prague, Czech Republic

Re: Will You Find (pop/ballad/something)

Post Thu Apr 17, 2014 8:35 am

You might be right with the key being too low. I gotta watch out for that if I work with her on a next song.

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