Dark Scary Ambient Psytrance - Comparing two versions of the song

Share your music, collaborate, and partake in monthly music contests.
User avatar
KVRist
240 posts since 9 Dec, 2013

Post Mon May 12, 2014 4:26 am

Hello everybody!
Here I go with the new remake of my "Forest On Mushrooms" song, which is supposed to be much more scary, more psychedelic and little bit more alive. Yet still it is amateur. I will be very grateful for feedbacks! :)

The 2014 Remake: https://soundcloud.com/brain-claim/fore ... 2014-scary

The old version: https://soundcloud.com/brain-claim/fore ... oms-just-a

User avatar
KVRAF
4131 posts since 7 Jun, 2012 from Warsaw

Post Mon May 12, 2014 5:05 am

The new one has somewhat better bass, but otherwise there's no big difference. Tracks lack power and focus and are made mostly out of noises. You first need some groove and driving basline and then can build effects and flow around then.

Also, the mix completely lacks low-end, sounds as high-passed.
http://djwarmonger.wordpress.com/
Tricky-Loops wrote: (...)someone like Armin van Buuren who claims to make a track in half an hour and all his songs sound somewhat boring(...)

User avatar
KVRist

Topic Starter

240 posts since 9 Dec, 2013

Post Mon May 12, 2014 5:42 am

Thanks so much for your feedback! Yeah, it lacks power and climax, I have already been told that, that's why it is rather more ambient than psychedelic trance. Thanks for your advice, anyway! I appreciate that!

Return to “Music Cafe”