Mr Natural - Evolution - a Study in Atheisism in F#m

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KVRAF
2665 posts since 28 Oct, 2007 from michigan

Post Tue Nov 25, 2014 7:09 pm

Evolution

if that doesn't work : kindly try - https://soundcloud.com/mrnatural-1/evolution

this is a rough draft of a concept that has been worked for the last 48hrs

hope you dig it & your feedback would be very welcome

peace
expert only on what it feels like to be me
& you are who you google
https://soundcloud.com/mrnatural-1/tracks

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KVRAF

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2665 posts since 28 Oct, 2007 from michigan

Post Tue Nov 25, 2014 7:28 pm

perhaps . . . I can't spell tonight
:=)

still hope you might like the piece
expert only on what it feels like to be me
& you are who you google
https://soundcloud.com/mrnatural-1/tracks

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KVRAF
10398 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK

Post Thu Nov 27, 2014 6:02 pm

I enjoyed this. The guitar parts reminded me of some of the stuff Fripp played in the late '70s or early '80s as backing parts for various musicians. I thought the song style overall was reminiscent of some of John Martyn's more laid-back moments in the mid '80s. These are compliments BTW. Nice jobs with the vocals too.

Good work :)

KVRian
767 posts since 22 Mar, 2007 from Punta Gorda, Florida USA

Post Thu Nov 27, 2014 7:50 pm

Great piece! I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for that. Every facet was very well done. Pretty work.

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KVRAF

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2665 posts since 28 Oct, 2007 from michigan

Post Thu Nov 27, 2014 9:48 pm

thanks Bubba, thanks Seismic
I really worked hard on this one and it means quite a bit to me to get some feedback for my efforts

peace
expert only on what it feels like to be me
& you are who you google
https://soundcloud.com/mrnatural-1/tracks

D.H. MOD
14218 posts since 21 Jun, 2008

Post Fri Nov 28, 2014 5:07 pm

Well done. I enjoyed this. Thanks, Mister Natural.

KVRian
902 posts since 30 Nov, 2004

Post Sat Nov 29, 2014 9:07 am

Sounds like massive attack but a bit more 'safe'.
The vocals could be a bit more mysterious to fit the music

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KVRAF
5712 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Post Sat Nov 29, 2014 9:10 pm

It could be a lost Tears for Fears demo. :)

It's quite rough but I like it. I think you could shorten it, write some more lyrics, and improve the production.

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