https://soundcloud.com/abiuslu/spare-time
hi there!
Hope you like it, please tell me what you think!
Regards
"Spare Time" - Electopop-Ballad
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
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- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
excellent production all the way around. i always enjoy your works man. the effort to make it sound polished is very evident here. one small suggestion.... the main vocals could be more up front in the soundstage and a hair louder in the mix. they sound ok in the beginning, but start to sound buried when more instrumentation comes in.
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HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
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- KVRAF
- 6325 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
This could be great song but, in its current state, I would say this is a promising demo. I think it could use a lot more work: the mix levels sound odd to me, the sound design is rough and noisy, excessive reverb, and timing inconsistencies on the drums.
I can't figure out what's going on with the vocals. It sounds like she is calling you on a bad cell phone with autotune and buckets of reverb applied. Perhaps you incorporated some accapella vocals you found somewhere?
Maybe you could work on it some more if you have ..... spare time.
I can't figure out what's going on with the vocals. It sounds like she is calling you on a bad cell phone with autotune and buckets of reverb applied. Perhaps you incorporated some accapella vocals you found somewhere?
Maybe you could work on it some more if you have ..... spare time.
