New "old school" Ibiza track - Spirals

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GFunk
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210 posts since 29 Jun, 2012 from Leeds, UK

Post Thu Jul 09, 2015 3:46 am

Here's my latest track I've made. Looking forward to hearing any feedback...

https://soundcloud.com/gavin-jackson/spirals
Cubase user, House producer.

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jasco
KVRist
209 posts since 25 Aug, 2002 from Leeds

Re: New "old school" Ibiza track - Spirals

Post Thu Jul 09, 2015 4:19 am

Hi Gavin, solid track. However, I think it's positively screaming out for a vocal!

GFunk
KVRist
210 posts since 29 Jun, 2012 from Leeds, UK

Re: New "old school" Ibiza track - Spirals

Post Thu Jul 09, 2015 4:29 am

Thanks Jasco! I see you're from Leeds........any good at singing? :)
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jasco
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209 posts since 25 Aug, 2002 from Leeds

Re: New "old school" Ibiza track - Spirals

Post Thu Jul 09, 2015 4:32 am

lol NO

Taifunk
KVRian
877 posts since 28 Feb, 2015 from Interstella 5555

Re: New "old school" Ibiza track - Spirals

Post Thu Jul 09, 2015 5:58 am

is a really nice track, it reminds me so much the mid-90s and puts in a good mood :wink:

GFunk
KVRist
210 posts since 29 Jun, 2012 from Leeds, UK

Re: New "old school" Ibiza track - Spirals

Post Thu Jul 09, 2015 12:06 pm

Thanks Taifunk. Glad I could lift your spirits.
Cubase user, House producer.

http://soundcloud.com/gavin-jackson

Matt van k
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37 posts since 30 Jul, 2014

Re: New "old school" Ibiza track - Spirals

Post Fri Jul 10, 2015 1:20 am

A good choice for a Music cafe. :)

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annode
KVRAF
6132 posts since 29 Mar, 2003 from Location: Location

Re: New "old school" Ibiza track - Spirals

Post Fri Jul 10, 2015 6:28 am

Solid sounding track.
Instrument sounds are good.If me, I would shorten up the e-piano envelope so it sounds tighter and more percussive. (or quantize the midi track if that does the trick)
I also felt 16 measures before bringing in the next new part seemed too long.
If me, I would work on the hat and shaker rhythms. Being a shuffle beat, the hats and shaker are integral for a solid shuffle.
Took too long to get to the lead synth line...that goes back to the 16 measure thing above.
....................Don`t blame me for 'The Roots', I just live here. :x
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GFunk
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210 posts since 29 Jun, 2012 from Leeds, UK

Re: New "old school" Ibiza track - Spirals

Post Fri Jul 10, 2015 9:22 am

@ Matt van k - Thanks dude.

@ annode - Thanks. I appreciate your feedback.
Cubase user, House producer.

http://soundcloud.com/gavin-jackson

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