Thoughts so far?

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Coxy
KVRian
676 posts since 31 Aug, 2004 from England !

Post Thu Jul 16, 2015 12:18 pm

I'm burning out on this one - what's your thoughts on next steps?

Ignore the very end bit after silence that was just me testing out different melodies.

https://soundcloud.com/coxys/2015-07-12a

Cheers

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folderol
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4780 posts since 5 Aug, 2006 from UK - Here!

Re: Thoughts so far?

Post Sat Jul 18, 2015 7:30 am

Youve got some good ideas there. That repeating phrase - that is only really clear in the drop - could do with being more prominent, and (like this month's contest) maybe turn it into a call & response, either a different sound or an inversion of the phrase in some way - or both :)

I like the idea of the fnal drop then finish, but I'd suggest keeping just a little something faintly ticking over.
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was)

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Coxy
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676 posts since 31 Aug, 2004 from England !

Re: Thoughts so far?

Post Sun Jul 19, 2015 2:31 am

folderol wrote:Youve got some good ideas there. That repeating phrase - that is only really clear in the drop - could do with being more prominent, and (like this month's contest) maybe turn it into a call & response, either a different sound or an inversion of the phrase in some way - or both :)

I like the idea of the fnal drop then finish, but I'd suggest keeping just a little something faintly ticking over.
Thanks mate, good advice here - appreciated.

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