[Dance Pop] Capturing The Moment of Life
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 163 posts since 22 Oct, 2016
This is a Pop song I'm currently working on. I plan to add vocals to this song so it might seem a little repetitive.
https://soundcloud.com/kyrptomusic/idea ... d-mastered
https://soundcloud.com/kyrptomusic/idea ... d-mastered
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- KVRAF
- 2590 posts since 19 Mar, 2008 from germany
Yes - your hook-arpeggio is constantly present - through the
whole song. This alone is rather monotonous and obtrusive
IMO. You need a vocal line!
whole song. This alone is rather monotonous and obtrusive
IMO. You need a vocal line!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 163 posts since 22 Oct, 2016
Yes this song was meant for vocals! It's definitely too repetitive otherwise.
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- KVRian
- 950 posts since 30 Nov, 2004
kinda bouncy, which is fun.
I like the drums too! You could also choose to add in a new melody later
I like the drums too! You could also choose to add in a new melody later
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 163 posts since 22 Oct, 2016
I just made some changes so the main riff isn't playing the entire time. Should be a lot less repetitive now.