"Lazing with Layzer" By Keel

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ATS
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5804 posts since 21 Dec, 2002 from MD USA

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 3:06 am

Ok I spent hours redoing the bass part of the mix and the "mastering". I think it is much better now. Why do we do all this work for like 3 people to listen? :lol:


Soundcloud sucks some life out of it. Here you can download it if you want better sound. https://spaces.hightail.com/receive/IMRHfShwz8


https://soundcloud.com/user-129985720/l ... ith-layzer
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layzer
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Re: "Stage Fright" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 7:40 pm

simple composition, dont mind that.... but choice of sounds is kinda same ol same ol supersaw fare.
productionwise, it seems you got a backward freqency spectrum slant going on < but thats
just my opinion of course.
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Aloysius
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Re: "Stage Fright" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 8:07 pm

I like it. My only criticism would be the title. It seems to have nothing to do with the relaxing music.
I didn't get where I am today ...

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ATS
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Re: "Stage Fright" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 8:10 pm

layzer wrote:simple composition, dont mind that.... but choice of sounds is kinda same ol same ol supersaw fare.
productionwise, it seems you got a backward freqency spectrum slant going on < but thats
just my opinion of course.

hey thanks a lot. What is a backward freqency spectrum slant? And any ideas how to fix it?

Thanks again.
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Re: "Stage Fright" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 8:10 pm

Aloysius wrote:I like it. My only criticism would be the title. It seems to have nothing to do with the relaxing music.

I am not married to the title at all. In fact I was thinking the same. Any idea appreciated. :)
my music: http://www.alexcooperusa.com
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Aloysius
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Re: "Stage Fright" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 8:12 pm

Lazing with Layzer?
I didn't get where I am today ...

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ATS
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Re: "Stage Fright" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 8:13 pm

Aloysius wrote:Lazing with Layzer?

I like it better than what I got :)
my music: http://www.alexcooperusa.com
The purpose of art is washing the dust of daily life off our souls ~ Pablo Picasso

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Re: "Lazing with Layzer" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 8:15 pm

:lol: :tu:
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layzer
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Re: "Stage Fright" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 8:23 pm

ATS wrote:
Aloysius wrote:Lazing with Layzer?

I like it better than what I got :)
awww, i'm honored, except you gotta fix that backward freq spec slant before it
can have anything to do with me :idea:
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

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Re: "Stage Fright" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 8:29 pm

layzer wrote:
ATS wrote:
Aloysius wrote:Lazing with Layzer?

I like it better than what I got :)
awww, i'm honored, except you gotta fix that backward freq spec slant before it
can have anything to do with me :idea:

I wish I knew how or what it was. :)
my music: http://www.alexcooperusa.com
The purpose of art is washing the dust of daily life off our souls ~ Pablo Picasso

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layzer
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Re: "Stage Fright" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 8:46 pm

ATS wrote:
layzer wrote:
ATS wrote:
Aloysius wrote:Lazing with Layzer?

I like it better than what I got :)
awww, i'm honored, except you gotta fix that backward freq spec slant before it
can have anything to do with me :idea:

I wish I knew how or what it was. :)
https://emil-berliner-studios.com/img/t ... ktrum2.jpg
this is a proper freq spec slant :tu:
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

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Re: "Stage Fright" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 8:58 pm

layzer wrote:
ATS wrote:
layzer wrote:
ATS wrote:
Aloysius wrote:Lazing with Layzer?

I like it better than what I got :)
awww, i'm honored, except you gotta fix that backward freq spec slant before it
can have anything to do with me :idea:

I wish I knew how or what it was. :)
https://emil-berliner-studios.com/img/t ... ktrum2.jpg
this is a proper freq spec slant :tu:
This is what this shows, is this the same thing? I never learned anything about this stuff before. To me this looks like a good one?

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layzer
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Re: "Lazing with Layzer" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 10:01 pm

https://soundcloud.com/bassicmlindhe/ke ... bassic-mix
ok, Bassic is just one of many artists that know a thing or 3 about mixing and mastering.
compare his track to yours, you will notice yours lacks bass and the highs are over cooked.
thus the backward freq spectrum slant. look at his tracks graph in this screen cap.
again, compare to yours in my first comment.
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HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

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ATS
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5804 posts since 21 Dec, 2002 from MD USA

Re: "Lazing with Layzer" By Keel

Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 10:19 pm

layzer wrote:https://soundcloud.com/bassicmlindhe/ke ... bassic-mix
ok, Bassic is just one of many artists that know a thing or 3 about mixing and mastering.
compare his track to yours, you will notice yours lacks bass and the highs are over cooked.
thus the backward freq spectrum slant. look at his tracks graph in this screen cap.
again, compare to yours in my first comment.

yeah that makes sense I think. I cut a big chunk of bass out of the mix. Maybe too much.
my music: http://www.alexcooperusa.com
The purpose of art is washing the dust of daily life off our souls ~ Pablo Picasso

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5804 posts since 21 Dec, 2002 from MD USA

Re: "Lazing with Layzer" By Keel

Post Sat Nov 11, 2017 3:13 pm

layzer, I don't know if you will read this but thank you for pushing me to do my best on it and pointing out where it needed some work! I am glad the song is now named after you. I am still not sure the frequency spectrum is ideal.
my music: http://www.alexcooperusa.com
The purpose of art is washing the dust of daily life off our souls ~ Pablo Picasso

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