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RUDsc
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Post Thu Feb 22, 2018 3:40 pm


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thecontrolcentre
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23206 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny

Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

Post Thu Feb 22, 2018 3:48 pm

NO NEED TO SHOUT DUDE!!!

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layzer
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Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

Post Thu Feb 22, 2018 5:22 pm

IT WAS OK FOR A FIRST SONG ATTEMPT. TRY TO MATCH THE DRUM VOLUME CLOSER TO
THE OTHER SOUNDS NEXT TIME.
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Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

Post Fri Feb 23, 2018 5:43 am

I HAVE LOST MY CAPS LOCK BUTTON BRO

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whyterabbyt
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Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

Post Fri Feb 23, 2018 5:48 am

RUDsc wrote:I HAVE LOST MY CAPS LOCK BUTTON BRO

amazing that it seems to mysteriously work on your soundcloud account as of 2 minutes ago, then.
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RUDsc
KVRer
3 posts since 22 Feb, 2018

Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

Post Fri Feb 23, 2018 7:21 am

Hmm, thats weird

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thecontrolcentre
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Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

Post Fri Feb 23, 2018 7:26 am

RUDsc wrote:Hmm, thats weird
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KVRAF
3182 posts since 18 Mar, 2008

Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

Post Fri Feb 23, 2018 8:17 am

Progression works, good potential to have people nodding, but I feel that sound choices aren't that great, spend more time on this for sure.

Here's something for inspiration, notice how this one synth sounds drives this whole simple tune, you need something similar, get little out of the box, especially with brasses and all those trap cliches, you need fresh driving sound to really push it to another level.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NAPTgJeHGMA

Use this as starting point and than just add more oscillators on other octaves and experiment with different waves until something cool comes out.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y8MK6kuFeCE
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