[House] LWJ - Camel Ride

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lwj
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77 posts since 3 Feb, 2018

Post Sun Mar 11, 2018 3:06 am


JKillz
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181 posts since 30 Dec, 2017 from USA

Re: [House] LWJ - Camel Ride

Post Sun Mar 11, 2018 8:28 am

This has a lot of great stuff going on, I enjoyed the overall track and liked the groove.

Feedback is with good intentions. The track is a bit long and could be shorten down, but you have enough going on that it doesn't drag out or get boring easily. Also, some of the FX and percussions are too overpowering on the mix. Some volume control and maybe EQing can easily sort that out though. Lastly, around the 3min mark, there are some rhythmic elements that sound a little off beat, might be the delay timing or tempo if using samples.

Other than that, cool track, thanks for sharing!

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