Orchestral 2

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52 posts since 16 Nov, 2011

Post Fri Apr 20, 2018 11:58 am

Simple orchestral stuff, mostly boring and depressing.


893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006

Re: Orchestral 2

Post Sat Apr 21, 2018 11:48 am

"Simple orchestral stuff, mostly boring and depressing."

Not a very positive comment about your own music! :0)

There are some interesting textural moments in this piece...it starts very well, instantly creating a strong, yet peaceful atmosphere.

It doesn't however develop 100% effectively as it continues to progress...

1) Some good melodic ideas don't quite reach their full potential...clunky moments spoil their overall flow for me.

2) Contrasting material towards the end in terms of melody / chords could've also have done with some new sounds / layers etc.

3) It's just a bit too samey throughout...needs extra layers ebbing and flowing.

It's got potential, but needs more work for me.

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