She Feels (another thing...ElectroMetal?)
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 235 posts since 5 Jan, 2018 from Asheville, NC, USA
Made another thing, focusing a bit more on the guitars this time. Still very much a work in progress, needs a little bit of work on the vocals and some EQ cleanup in the lower mid 'mud' of things, as well as a little mix glue. But it's most of the way there.
Before you listen, this is a mix, and i mix quiet (usually around 0dbvu), and i don't mix into a mastering chain. So it's quiet. This is not unintentional, i save this for a dedicated mastering process.
Tell me what you think.
https://soundcloud.com/izalith/she-feels-wip
Before you listen, this is a mix, and i mix quiet (usually around 0dbvu), and i don't mix into a mastering chain. So it's quiet. This is not unintentional, i save this for a dedicated mastering process.
Tell me what you think.
https://soundcloud.com/izalith/she-feels-wip
- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
I could easily picture this on an album. Electro Metal, eh? Nice. Vocals. Live or sampled? Couldn't really tell.
As far as the mix, I don't hear anything wrong with it the way it is other than, as you said, the volume, which will be raised in the mastering process.
I like it.
As far as the mix, I don't hear anything wrong with it the way it is other than, as you said, the volume, which will be raised in the mastering process.
I like it.
- Banned
- 849 posts since 3 Jul, 2017
Professionally made track. The only downside is the volume. I think if you present it to a bigger audience, you should also master it, because of the loudness war (!) outthere.
Greetings
HM
Greetings
HM
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- KVRist
- 138 posts since 1 Sep, 2006
I really like this -- it's my kind of music (the kind I like to listen to, not the kind I'm actually making). Very much a Celldweller type of industrial/electronic metal. I love how it hits hard right about 4:20. Love the dynamics. Really nice job IMO. I would put this on my playlist.
I can't really effectively criticize the mix. It sounds great to my ears.
I do find the vocal part a little challenging. Maybe it's somebody singing in a language I'm not accustomed to hearing? Or are there parts chopped and spliced together?
I think this is great! Thanks for sharing it.
I can't really effectively criticize the mix. It sounds great to my ears.
I do find the vocal part a little challenging. Maybe it's somebody singing in a language I'm not accustomed to hearing? Or are there parts chopped and spliced together?
I think this is great! Thanks for sharing it.
- KVRAF
- 6325 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
A lot of cool ideas here from the delicate to the extreme. A little unstructured for my tastes although I imagine there would be an audience for this.
Interesting and unique.
Interesting and unique.
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- KVRian
- 766 posts since 23 Sep, 2003 from UK
Sounds good this end, well arranged and mixed. Top stuff.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 235 posts since 5 Jan, 2018 from Asheville, NC, USA
Thanks for all the feedback, guys! It's really appreciated and encouraging.
The vocals are a mixture of both...some field recordings and some acapellas from friends or YouTube, fed into Ableton's Simpler and spliced so that i can then 'perform' the vocal with my keyboard (and apply different warp modes for different effects). Sometimes it creates new words but usually incomprehensible gibberish, which i'm fine with (thanks, Burroughs) but i can see it being annoying. i'm massively influenced by Burial and y y y in the vocal area. Most of the original vocals are in English but sometimes i use Hindi, Italian, Gaelic or Arabic, depending on what i can find. i don't like using samples without words, oddly. They don't cut as well.
i'm thinking that this stuff will be put on an EP soon, at which point it'll be mastered and loud(er).
wagtunes wrote:Electro Metal, eh? Nice. Vocals. Live or sampled? Couldn't really tell..
i can't think of a better style term...electro metal sounds terrible, though, doesn't it? i'm open to suggestions.Rajiv wrote:I do find the vocal part a little challenging. Maybe it's somebody singing in a language I'm not accustomed to hearing? Or are there parts chopped and spliced together?
The vocals are a mixture of both...some field recordings and some acapellas from friends or YouTube, fed into Ableton's Simpler and spliced so that i can then 'perform' the vocal with my keyboard (and apply different warp modes for different effects). Sometimes it creates new words but usually incomprehensible gibberish, which i'm fine with (thanks, Burroughs) but i can see it being annoying. i'm massively influenced by Burial and y y y in the vocal area. Most of the original vocals are in English but sometimes i use Hindi, Italian, Gaelic or Arabic, depending on what i can find. i don't like using samples without words, oddly. They don't cut as well.
Yeah, i can definitely see that. Structure-wise, i'm definitely more in the post-whatever camp (Irepress, Explosions in the Sky, Isis, Neurosis) that doesn't really repeat as much than more structured electronic music. i just like the sounds in electronic music better.Frantz wrote:A little unstructured for my tastes although I imagine there would be an audience for this.
i'm thinking that this stuff will be put on an EP soon, at which point it'll be mastered and loud(er).
- KVRAF
- 3198 posts since 28 Aug, 2012 from Melbourne, Australia
Cool track. I like the shifts between styles. It has energy and maintains interest.
Guitar sounds great with nice variety and power.
Well done!
Guitar sounds great with nice variety and power.
Well done!
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Music with progressive intent.
Music with progressive intent.
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- KVRist
- 138 posts since 13 Jun, 2015
Powerful from starting to end. A Jewel in the net.
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- KVRAF
- 2367 posts since 17 Apr, 2004
Nice. The more free-form approach works well for this kind of thing IMO. It's sonic journey, not a singalong song.
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- KVRAF
- 1724 posts since 31 Dec, 2004 from betwixt
I love this, love the suddenness of the volume changes.
Starting to really hate the popular "mastered" sound of almost everything, for listening on a good system, or headphones, alone. I want a dynamic experience.
Really love the section staring around 3:08
Thanks for sharing your music
Starting to really hate the popular "mastered" sound of almost everything, for listening on a good system, or headphones, alone. I want a dynamic experience.
Really love the section staring around 3:08
Thanks for sharing your music